Comments by BoldSolitude
- ""Your obsession with finding my flaws,
Makes me think- you may still care." so true. i enjoyed the entire poem although the lines stated above were my favorite"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Heart Chains" by darth ren
- "I liked the 3rd and last stanza's the best. the poem flows so smooth and fast when you are reading it, you have to re-read it to get the depth of it. good write "
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Tainted Existance" by darth ren
- "I really liked the analogy of the ice being a perilous sea, never quite thought of it like that, i also liked the Silence was my partner, it really portrays a sense of loneliness"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "...and it was beautiful." by torn_beauty
- "great portrayel of the process, it's often hard to make the work live up to the idea or mean as much as "that little verse at the heart of it all""
Posted by BoldSolitude on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
- "...message, the struggle with ourselves (duality) or at least that is how I perceive both, great write, inspiration has a compounding affect doesn't it?"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "The Man Who Wasn't There" by Munkey
- "....however, it appears to have been inspired by David Bowie lyrics of "The man who sold the world" later covered by Nirvana. Look uo the lyrics if you don't know them, your poem and it has a similiar....."
Posted by BoldSolitude on "The Man Who Wasn't There" by Munkey
- "I know the movie you talk about and those lines are a haunting portrayal of split personalities or your own duality, It actually intrigued me enough to look into it years ago when I watched it and there isn't an end to it......"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "The Man Who Wasn't There" by Munkey
- "I never thought of nature aging before compared to our aging, but as you implied or I percieved, trees grow more majestic and we become decrepit. Nature refreshes itself and we tend to become more tainted."
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Pre-Winter Discontent" by purr_verse
- "I really liked the first three stanzas especially "Egos are a dime a dozen quickly spent' and also the first two lines of the fourth stanza rocked as well.
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Posted by BoldSolitude on "Get Over Yourself" by Empathy
- ""The leaf of a winter tree Condemned to soon fall" is my favorite lines but the entire poem was good"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Just" by PaperPromises
- ""I hate to let anyone see past my eyes" is such a true statement. Ithouroughly enjoyed the entire poem, especially the first two stanzas and the last line"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Frustration" by PaperPromises
- "Good flow and rhyme, comfort in sadness is a familiar feeling and grows weeker not stronger. I also liked the faded rainbow analogy."
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Lost Rainbow" by PaperPromises
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