Missionary Position
By Stranger
My hands upon your knees
I am Moses parting the waters
With your love you widen
Even farther than legs can go
Like a Bible opening to a secret passage
I run my fingers down the page
Looking for the word
That can save a man’s soul
That can freeze and shatter time
Now I am like Noah
Waiting out the storm
Waiting out the wrath of God
Waiting to seed the earth
You open the glowing gate to Eden
The birthplace of creation calling me home
Now I am like Adam
Heaping taboo upon my plate
My penis in the hand of woman
Leading me out of paradise
Our sins exposed like
Eve’s shame revealed
We ask forgiveness
Of a cherub and a sword
But these doors were closed long before
We chose this skin
Of animal and beast
So now you ask to call me master
And you beg to see my whip
For you are sure the joy of service
Will illuminate your path
But I am slave by noble birth
And I will not wear a mask
And before this night is over
We shall kneel together one last time
Our shackles of iron and wood like
Tight crowns upon our wrists and ankles
And I will look into your eyes
And watch the fire dying there
For you know a savior is coming
And you know that it is not I
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Comments on "Missionary Position"
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone
(48) wrote:
this piece is worthy of more examination then your average biblical analogy... the ideas are taken to an almost perverse level of comparasion like the actor is tying his experience to the exploits of the exaulted and tones it down again in attempt to redeem himself in the eyes of a diety that he's not quite sure of, deemed himself and rejected again. This is an extreamlly important piece in the fact that it paints the actor in a light of love hate love that exerts itself in all of human condition.
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On Sunday, October 20, 2019, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Sex as religion. Clever write, clever title and delicious content.
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On Monday, October 7, 2019, flawofthepoet
(52) wrote:
I didn't think I'd like this one, but it's really well put together.
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On Saturday, April 20, 2019, sheff
(137) wrote:
The last line draws this bold piece to a booming close. Well done
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On Saturday, July 14, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
I really enjoyed this one.
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A former member wrote:
The thought that went into this is incredible. Well done.
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On Wednesday, December 20, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I usually don't go for erotic themes, but this was very tasteful and deep
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A former member wrote:
Ah, the classic missionary position as told through the mouth of what appears to be a missionary. This is so erotic, and so well wrought, and I love it! Reb:).
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On Thursday, December 22, 2016, Nemo
(76) wrote:
hot and very deep i like it good job
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On Monday, November 28, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Breathtaking.
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On Monday, September 19, 2016, SilenttPerception
(27) wrote:
whoaaaa, well damn, i just saw words come out in power amazing! insane my friend thank you for this.
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On Monday, August 22, 2016, drasticdaydreams
(55) wrote:
Fantastic turn at the end. Thought provoking
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On Sunday, March 6, 2016, Broken doll
(15) wrote:
Well written, very stimulating
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On Sunday, January 3, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
glorious sacrelige, provocatively religious
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A former member wrote:
This is one of the best poems I have read in a while. Had me from the beginning to the very end. So erotic, yet...well...biblical. An interesting and effective blending of the two. Nice job!
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On Monday, November 9, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
Very erotic and thought provoking, well done
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On Monday, September 14, 2015, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
Love your parallel here...well spoken..well done...
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On Monday, August 10, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is awesome! Religion and sex, perfection. Haha.
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A former member wrote:
the complications of sex and expectation, seen through a kaleidoscope of biblical allegory, the need for a saviour and master to guide the way when neither of you are really out of the lost and found box... trying to find guidance in another person, trying to absorb someone else's truth. this gave me a lot to think about! thank you.
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A former member wrote:
This is a powerful and tantalizing piece! I'm glad that I found it.. I have to read more from you.. Such a delightful piece of art deserves to be worshiped and bookmarked! :)
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Naughty naughty! I love it...
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
Epic is the word hear... Definitely a twisted spiraling take on the missionary position...you take us among a wide horizon..a grand scene set upon the waters...the words speak oceans..it was sensual and smart..thanks
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On Tuesday, December 22, 2009, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
muhahaha
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On Sunday, August 2, 2009, Blood Saga
(78) wrote:
wow.
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On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, gnrrain
(19) wrote:
Flowed wonderfully. --David--
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A former member wrote:
Damn!! fast paced yet with a sensual cadence... simply loved it
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2008, blue
(1409) wrote:
HOLYHELL! By far one of the best poems I've read here. Dig it. ~b
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On Thursday, January 10, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Fuck...-Gin
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A former member wrote:
eroticly beautiful
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A former member wrote:
This left me very uncomfortably entertained.
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A former member wrote:
This is amazing. It's incredibly well written, and the picture you convey is just awesome. I'll be reading more of your work.
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A former member wrote:
Hmm.. It seems as though the "desires of the flesh" that you are trying so hard to get rid of are the things that you don't really want to get rid of in the first place.
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On Friday, June 2, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
psh do you really want forgiveness?
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On Monday, April 24, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
wow this poem was, wow. so damn sexy it was dripping off the screen.
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A former member wrote:
lol @ markus' comment... the biblical and sensual allegory is an interesting pairing... God never meant for sex to be evil... in it's proper place. So there really is nothing wrong with using the two together. great write.
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
this was amazing took my breath away so lovely -kitty
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On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
this was.. sacriligouse... yay!!!
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
The content of this was incredible; the presentation clear enough to do it justice. And I would not be doing it justice if I didn't make it a favorite. Very nice work.
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On Sunday, October 24, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36) wrote:
Very nice. I loved how you used the bible for such a sinful thing (bad bad bad - shame on you!) lol.
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A former member wrote:
i really like this. by using the bible in your poem, it creates even more sensuality. i never thought i'd use those 2 words togther- bible and sensual...
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
Definatle with GB on this, well writter, love the biblical spin, very sensual... Kya
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful...
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i agree, very good biblical references and stuff.. lovely write..
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A former member wrote:
Superb use of Biblical metaphor …
GB
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
wow, sex and the bible, combined into one, amazing.....-Oz-
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, elisa
(1595) wrote:
now this is some unholiness I can sink my teeth in;) this is hot! elisa
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On Thursday, August 26, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
woah ... fuckin' beautiful ... kept such consistant tone , with perfect pitch throughout .. simply fascinating approach ... this isimportant work ... funguy