Comments by tonebone
- "S.V. I read this piece several times but from the very first time I felt a sense of something beyond familial and was cemented with your profound epiphany "your words hold no meaning
I'm only fluent in actions" which stands extremely well as a self sustaining truth, but then you kindly deliver a tenet that I've found a great deal of comfort in and that's the idea that oppositions exist in perfect harmony without apology or explanation. I intuitively sense lesser beings cringe at this concept because they have a distorted vision of control not yet rectified by a particular lesson in sentience. Anyway I'm no sage, (although I sometimes play one in these forums),LOL I recognise in many of your works that I've pondered a larger sense of what it is to "be"... I found this work to have great form and presentation which delivered its message with thought and precision and i'm looking forward to more! ...tonebone"
Posted by tonebone on "~741 Hz~" by soul_versing
- "Phalanx I could wish you happier times as, I, a being possessing, to some degree empathy for my fellows but we both know these exercises are clap-trap and so forth..ad nauseam. The very well placed elements in this offering are not given to gain favor, shock or estrange although they might. I dont feel any are entertained when these personal declarations are uttered. I can't say for sure what you're looking for my friend but I don't think it's something as mundane as peace. There is a thing very similar in myself and it caused a smile. I'm not sure anyone could council such a dilemma and I'm sure they've tried. Eleven years is a long time my friend. A long time."
Posted by tonebone on "Snapshot" by Phalanx
- "Dear Magdelana, I am new to this site and I read your piece once and reviewed members feedback and then I read the piece again and it took on a whole new meaning. Of course at first I recognized a delicacy of choice of words and a deliberate diction so precise that it seemed to render the work with no room for improvement. I am sorry for your loss...not sorry that I was given the opportunity to enjoy this very special sentiment and also to get privilaged and touching insight into a fellow poet."
Posted by tonebone on "Corinthian~ΚοÏινθιακή" by Magdalena
- "this is really an awesome piece also. you have the ability to step outside yourself and create something completely outside your realm, or perhaps it's completely within."
Posted by tonebone on " R.E.A.L." by Stranger
- "this does not have to hurt and your right...it does not. the simplicity of your ideals are for everyone...at a moments notice"
Posted by tonebone on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger
- "ive only read a few of your pieces and im already very impressed with the content, familiarity and thought that has gone into your work... thank you."
Posted by tonebone on "Musing" by Stranger
- "you have been lauded as protector..reap its bennefits and honor its' authority and thanks for showing me how to do the same."
Posted by tonebone on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "this piece is worthy of more examination then your average biblical analogy... the ideas are taken to an almost perverse level of comparasion like the actor is tying his experience to the exploits of the exaulted and tones it down again in attempt to redeem himself in the eyes of a diety that he's not quite sure of, deemed himself and rejected again. This is an extreamlly important piece in the fact that it paints the actor in a light of love hate love that exerts itself in all of human condition."
Posted by tonebone on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "An attempt to slough the vestiges of plague?..."a deviantly planned ruine" you might be on to something."
Posted by tonebone on "in unison " by Vesica Piscis
- "Loupe garu in all of us but you have 'captured' something important here...would you really let it in? Bravo purr_verse!"
Posted by tonebone on "Lupercal" by purr_verse
- "I would just like to add in hopes many will see this post on comments that the more I read on this site the more I am impressed with the content and talent of its members. I perused many poetry sites and although there are a lot of talented poets out there today I can say with a keen ear that the voice of poetry lives in this site...Long live Dark Poetry!"
Posted by tonebone on "Kisses Goodnight (that never last long enough)" by Lab Rat
- "What an incredibly poignant glimpse into an instant or epoch of the absolute joy of parenthood. The occasional rhyme scheme brings this piece full circle in the realm of free form poetry and even tho I am not a huge fan of sacchrine sentiment this piece was composed with just the right amount of genuine thought and authentic emotion to make it a piece that evokes the feeling weilded by the writer. Kudos to you Apathetic Rage (I had a hard time writing your screen name with a straight face after reading this poem), I apologize for saying that out loud, perhaps you see my dilema? Thank you for the poem tho. tb."
Posted by tonebone on "Kisses Goodnight (that never last long enough)" by Lab Rat
- "When I first posted on this site i was a little confused but all the short pieces that begin with the phrase "In this dream" are part of a chapbook of poems I'd recently written called "In this dream" And there is a 'foreword' to this capbook and an epilogue called "backword" and all of these brief pieces are snippets of actual dreams that I have tried to build into a series of joined ideas. I've also tried to turn these thoughts from myself to the reader by stating in the beginning of each piece "In this dream "YOU" in an attempt to force the reader to adopt my position and cause the reader to put himself in my place and therefore gain a sense of comradery with the writer."
Posted by tonebone on "Grave Diggers Winter" by tonebone
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