Missionary Position
By Stranger
My hands upon your knees
I am Moses parting the waters
With your love you widen
Even farther than legs can go
Like a Bible opening to a secret passage
I run my fingers down the page
Looking for the word
That can save a man’s soul
That can freeze and shatter time
Now I am like Noah
Waiting out the storm
Waiting out the wrath of God
Waiting to seed the earth
You open the glowing gate to Eden
The birthplace of creation calling me home
Now I am like Adam
Heaping taboo upon my plate
My penis in the hand of woman
Leading me out of paradise
Our sins exposed like
Eve’s shame revealed
We ask forgiveness
Of a cherub and a sword
But these doors were closed long before
We chose this skin
Of animal and beast
So now you ask to call me master
And you beg to see my whip
For you are sure the joy of service
Will illuminate your path
But I am slave by noble birth
And I will not wear a mask
And before this night is over
We shall kneel together one last time
Our shackles of iron and wood like
Tight crowns upon our wrists and ankles
And I will look into your eyes
And watch the fire dying there
For you know a savior is coming
And you know that it is not I
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Comments on "Missionary Position"
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On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
Beautiful, I loved it. Naughty, but nice..great write..
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
very very good. the emotion, the passion.. very raw.. i like it a lot. ~Drea~
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On Saturday, September 20, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
it's so amazing how you have put in unison two things that most of the world percieves like North and South. This is beaty and sensuality...
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
I love this. Absolutely beautiful...
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, anathema
(50) wrote:
this is amazing... descriptive, yet leaving so much to the mind's eye... beautifully done.
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On Saturday, July 5, 2003, gspot
(44) wrote:
i like this a lot killer mix of biblical mythology and sensuality. you balance a sense of taboo with common desire perfectly.
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
this is a read that speaks deeply to me... god yes... and sometimes.. we are all slaves to each other... as MR always said to me... who's really in charge? he who wields the whip, or she who lets him?
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On Saturday, July 5, 2003, gspot
(44) wrote:
i think velvet tongue might argue that should be "she who wields the whip, or he who lets her."
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On Thursday, June 19, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i love the parallel that you have givin, most interesting.your writing is sound and deviate at the same time, well done.........urban
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
A wonderful blend of religious and sexual images. It is a disconcerting yet brilliant combination. Well done.
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow...
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
so deep, all this meaning and i'm sure i didnt understand all of it but what i did catch was beautiful and i love it ~Dawn
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
no, the poem definitely goes deeper than a penthouse letter... i felt the abyss, the despair, the final comfort of drowning in emotion, clinging to her until that final instant when some fire dies. i am sad today.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
i agree with fish.....as always....master fish...
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem! Though in the christian mythology Moses parted the Red Sea, so that created a nasty visual in my head! Period!
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On Friday, September 5, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
woooo not only did i love this poem but twinkles comment as well! -Kryz
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Stranger
(263) wrote:
The double entendre is cute. However, in my defense, this poem is not exactly a Penthouse letter. The metaphor was meant to go a little deeper.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
It definitely dug deeper...
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
i love it!!! this is great...