Missionary Position

By Stranger

My hands upon your knees
I am Moses parting the waters

With your love you widen
Even farther than legs can go
Like a Bible opening to a secret passage

I run my fingers down the page
Looking for the word
That can save a man’s soul
That can freeze and shatter time

Now I am like Noah
Waiting out the storm
Waiting out the wrath of God
Waiting to seed the earth

You open the glowing gate to Eden
The birthplace of creation calling me home

Now I am like Adam
Heaping taboo upon my plate
My penis in the hand of woman
Leading me out of paradise

Our sins exposed like
Eve’s shame revealed
We ask forgiveness
Of a cherub and a sword

But these doors were closed long before
We chose this skin
Of animal and beast

So now you ask to call me master
And you beg to see my whip
For you are sure the joy of service
Will illuminate your path

But I am slave by noble birth
And I will not wear a mask

And before this night is over
We shall kneel together one last time
Our shackles of iron and wood like
Tight crowns upon our wrists and ankles

And I will look into your eyes
And watch the fire dying there
For you know a savior is coming
And you know that it is not I











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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Tuesday, June 17, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Johny_D_Lewis On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    Beautiful, I loved it. Naughty, but nice..great write..

  • Drea On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    very very good. the emotion, the passion.. very raw.. i like it a lot. ~Drea~

  • diavolessa On Saturday, September 20, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    it's so amazing how you have put in unison two things that most of the world percieves like North and South. This is beaty and sensuality...

  • Bluegirl On Friday, September 19, 2003, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I love this. Absolutely beautiful...

  • anathema On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    this is amazing... descriptive, yet leaving so much to the mind's eye... beautifully done.

  • gspot On Saturday, July 5, 2003, gspot (44)By person wrote:

    i like this a lot killer mix of biblical mythology and sensuality. you balance a sense of taboo with common desire perfectly.

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    this is a read that speaks deeply to me... god yes... and sometimes.. we are all slaves to each other... as MR always said to me... who's really in charge? he who wields the whip, or she who lets him?

  • gspot On Saturday, July 5, 2003, gspot (44)By person wrote:

    i think velvet tongue might argue that should be "she who wields the whip, or he who lets her."

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, June 19, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    i love the parallel that you have givin, most interesting.your writing is sound and deviate at the same time, well done.........urban

  • Delphoid-Q On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    A wonderful blend of religious and sexual images. It is a disconcerting yet brilliant combination. Well done.

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    wow...

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, IceDragoness (193)By person wrote:

    so deep, all this meaning and i'm sure i didnt understand all of it but what i did catch was beautiful and i love it ~Dawn

  • Jonas On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    no, the poem definitely goes deeper than a penthouse letter... i felt the abyss, the despair, the final comfort of drowning in emotion, clinging to her until that final instant when some fire dies. i am sad today.

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    i agree with fish.....as always....master fish...

  • A former member wrote: I like this poem! Though in the christian mythology Moses parted the Red Sea, so that created a nasty visual in my head! Period!

  • Crystal Passion On Friday, September 5, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    woooo not only did i love this poem but twinkles comment as well! -Kryz

  • Stranger On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    The double entendre is cute. However, in my defense, this poem is not exactly a Penthouse letter. The metaphor was meant to go a little deeper.

  • Mistress Morbid On Friday, March 5, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    It definitely dug deeper...

  • blackdarkness On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    i love it!!! this is great...


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