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A ticket, please...
By diavolessa
the night falls silent over this city
over letters of a widow looking for love
“A ticket, please – one way, please,”
On the platform a stranger will waive
“A ticket, please for the first train,”
for the one that parts with dreams
when the sun opens his unwashed eyes
after last nights orgy with a bunch of moons
“A ticket, please for whoknowswhere,”
where desire turns into a slut
with short skirts and showing skin
where passion dies in icy flames
This is it, I’ll leave, don’t try to stop me
won’t keep me up at night thinking
close your eyes, sleep peaceful
over the raped silence of time
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Copyright 2003 diavolessa
Published on Monday, May 12, 2003.
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Comments on "A ticket, please..."
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On Sunday, March 4, 2012, Deviated09
(90)
wrote:
I very much like this one. Very intense.. Great write, very great write
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
your style of writing really astounds me. hope i have half your talent. great write on this, by the way. :)
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
i dig this poem, internal meaning, outward appeal, wonderful feel.........urban
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I like the flow and imagry of this one - my favourite lines are "“A ticket, please for the first train,” for the one that parts with dreams when the sun opens his unwashed eyes". Very nice!
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful, your words flow well!
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
I think this is so pretty... good job~Dawn
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Awesomely written. I liked this a lot.
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
Clever wording . i didnt directly see the subliminal shield that you hung over this poem ... but im sure tonite while im sleeping, it will crawl up into my conscience an scare me .. Beautiful work
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This was a welcome surprise. I will look forward to reading more of your work. Excellent.
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
very good! will enjoy reading some of your other work...
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A former member wrote:
third stanza made me double take. "where passion dies in icy flames" like it alot
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