Angels Three
By cre
O' Child, when he would come for thee
Thine angels they would cry
In angst, I guess, and nothing less
Three screams would rend the night
Although at first it seems absurd
To see a child so wee
Surrounded thus, we must discuss
The way they came to be
'Twas just one night with little light
While winds did smash around
Such sorrow on that eve and morrow
Soul's own death toll did sound
Her mighty heart did rip apart
And anguished Sky did tear
Despair in pain did shriek his name
At thy softly whispered prayer
Though pain and death do steal my breath
Let me not be wrought asunder
Oh Angels weep o'er slaughtered sheep
And break the spell they're under
And darkened Night did hide thy plight
Not from celestial eyes
Upon thy plea they answered thee
And gathered surely nigh
Courage gifted, thy spirits lifted
Though pain did still stalk thee
Forever hence at thy defense
Angelic warriors, three
Though sadly he, still came for thee
Thine angels kept thee sane
'Till pain and death that stole thy breath
Had finally passed away.
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Comments on "Angels Three"
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On Monday, February 4, 2008, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
So very good, prithee, what inspired thee to write so?
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
you are such an amazing writer, and so inspirational too. Awesome write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
ok so i just looked and i've already left a comment from the past. but meh, again it just proves how much i love this poem. LOL ~gothic
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
all i have to say is that i am left in shock. Shock because i have not read this before, shocked because of its exquisite beauty, shocked because i am shocked. As i'm sure your well a where, i have a "thing" for Angels and this is THE best angel poem i th
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On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
think i have ever read from DP. Cre you have completely out done yourself at this one. I have always loved your work but this particular poem has put a new prespictive of you, and your talent. Bravo, pat yourself on the back.... wow. ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
Ahh...this was beautiful Cre. The old language...it just...you seemed to have mastered it. Is there anything you can't write?
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
Very sweet write by a very sweet person! +Fallen Angel+
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
The first time was silent, the second outloud, the third...in a whisper...the fourth in amazement...though I'm not sure why. Your soul shouts it's feeling and meaning with every word...every poem.
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On Friday, July 4, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
I am for a first...lost for words. So poignant, so meant and so much more is this work...that I can't dissect my own feelings for it enough to tell you about them. Thankyou for sharing this one with us. ~DW~
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A former member wrote:
immaculate. :)
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful. Deeply spiritual. Love it.
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
DAMN!!!That was an awesome poem, I could see that one being put in Cre's best Poems, way down the road, its so much like a poem of the older styles, like Poe, or Crowlwy. I love the wording on it, and just everything.
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
see that first word in that comment right above this comment? thats my comment. and it is very. -B
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
just great Jane! This is one more great piece! keep writing! :)
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
magnificent. I would have had a very difficult time writing in this style... you did it so beautifully....so effortlessly. :)
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On Tuesday, March 18, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i read this, first, like beat poetry; i let the words just roll off of my tongue and ignored the meaning... it was beautiful... i read again and it became moreso... i like the changes in your styles.
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Damn you, always trying to upstage me! I admit it was good, but that doesn't change the fact that you're a loser. :[ BATS!!!
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
great read...just screams ur talent away!
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A former member wrote:
wow this is very good, i enjoy it more more :)