Comments by Ravenblade
- "well it reads fairly easily. I don't know if I can put this to music though. still, lyric writing is so technical; and a challenge. It appears well done, although you missed the "L" on lungs in the beginning"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Debris" by HeadpatSlut
- "Thank you for that, but I simply write what consumes me. My comments, though few, are always heartfelt and honest. No reciprocation necessary, I assure you."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Masochisms Bliss" by Ravenblade
- "I had no poetic direction when I wrote this. I was young, angsty, and had a lot of things to sort out. My notes on it even kinda explained what was going on. It was two different events that were going on, and with 2 different people; so in effect could have been 2 poems. "
Posted by Ravenblade on "Tail Lights Fade" by Ravenblade
- "ouch, what pain to be let down over and over again...the reference of a gatling gun seemed too fitting for comfort. How do you tear into my life and elicit such a response from an empty shell?"
Posted by Ravenblade on "... .44 magnum ..." by NikesRain
- "Wow...nicely done. I too have been through the tumult of human emotions with someone who fails to reciprocate in the way I needed; it truly is one of the life events that shapes who we are."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Dove Psalm" by kiss of the dark
- "It's hard to lower our walls only long enough to let one in at a time...fuck being vulnerable...you want my feelings; Molon Labe"
Posted by Ravenblade on "My Wall" by Deathkitten
- "oh, the disparity of rejection, or feelings not returned. This happened to flow rather nicely, and the rhyme scheme didn't feel forced at all...it was a pleasant treat. Well done. "
Posted by Ravenblade on "What Have You Done" by The Silent Pendulum
- "ahhh, too many times I have asked to be unchained by the emotional factory of this life. Well done"
Posted by Ravenblade on "I am" by Kinkypoptart
- "Very close...leather bound book matching much of pandora's box. Ideally full of poetry, lyrics, art, ideas, rants, raves, etc. I have one, I think all people should...sometimes it can be an unhealthy escape for some"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Trodden" by Ravenblade
- "I just can't ever stop reading this and feeling that urge that I am reaching in vain for something that I have only idealized. Sorry how things went down...you are still one of the best poets to ever bless this place"
Posted by Ravenblade on "of photographs and static-filled skies." by Six-Out
- "Reminds me of childhood torments...this is what real poetry looks like. I loved that the rhyme scheme never felt forced, the narrative was never altered to feel scattered or inconsistent. This is the type of poetry I can only aspire to write someday. Well done, sir."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Playing God, Beneath the Overpass." by TheProphetUntold
- "what more can I add to this other than this has to be one of the most raw, and accurate depiction of an act with so many shades....I wish all poetry could live up to this level for my sake of reading...but I myself would never be able to post...well done is by far an understatement, but the best I can offer"
Posted by Ravenblade on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "This takes me back to a much younger, angrier part of my life...sometimes its good to reminisce...perhaps this is just what I needed. "
Posted by Ravenblade on "The Baby Mouse" by devilsrighthand
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