Where Nightmares Collide
By Stormcomin
In the bowels of pain, where angels have cried
Where the howling of demons harmoniously chide
And pleas of forgiveness, forever denied
For torturous memories, one has to abide
This is the dreamscape...
A dowry of sin
This is the prison where nightmares begin
In this cavernous Hell, created in mind
Where the angels lie hopeless, abused and maligned
Their prayers unanswered, forever entwined
In maddening echoes of things far behind
This is the shadow...
Cast endless and cold
This is the darkness where nightmares unfold
In this feverish void, where angels are slain
Where the torments rip through a subliminal domain
And demons meander, forever insane
With thunderous whispers so loud and profane
This is the anger...
That boils inside
This is the fury where nightmares collide
Comments on "Where Nightmares Collide"
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On Sunday, August 14, 2016, Anarchist
(12) wrote:
Masterpiece.....words are seldom arranged to leave this kind of impact your poem has left on me.
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A former member wrote:
I absolutely love this
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
The images in my head are so vivid. Thank you for that.
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A former member wrote:
i love the rhythm, the jargon, everything about this poem is close to perfection as things may get. please write more(:
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On Tuesday, March 10, 2009, darkcoldplace
(6) wrote:
very good stuff
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A former member wrote:
Oh My God, this is AMAZING!!
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A former member wrote:
Oh.my.freaking.god.that's.so.amazing!
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A former member wrote:
This is an utterly fantastic write. You could set this to a metronome! Absolutely brilliant and wonderful. ~April
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A former member wrote:
This is the first bit of poetry I have read on this site that left me speachless. - Awesome Job! -
Trace
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
this is just absolutely-remarkable---the vivid and eery[haunting]images these words paint---such a powerful feel...wonderous work*
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A former member wrote:
wow...i am speechless. sincerely and painfully speechless. this was amazing. such descriptions--put so many pictures in my head, i love it. may i post it on my website for my friends to read? its so amazing, i cant get enough. -abandoned beauty
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Philla
(95) wrote:
I soooo fucking worship you!!!
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A former member wrote:
WoW Wow and Wow, its bad no fresh pieces for u, dont stop writing ur talent adn words are marvelous.
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A former member wrote:
intense...it drew me into to your void.-zay
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, island warrior
(210) wrote:
the poem definately made an impact. the concluding lines are brilliant.
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
"This is the fury where nightmares collide" ...so powerful!!! this whole piece just works so well together! perfect tempo changing! outstanding work! ding~fav list! brian
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, cre
(410) wrote:
My god . . this is incredible. I don't feel as though I merely "read" this . . I feel that it reached out from this page and insinuated itself into my mind. The rhyme and flow is gorgeous, and the subject matter is perfect . . a vivid masterpiece . . sha
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, cre
(410) wrote:
shall I go on? Very very well done.
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A former member wrote:
OLd has stated precisely what I was thinking. This piece is exactly what I have been yearning for. You have quenched my thirst... and are now the newest of my favourites. =-MO-=
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A former member wrote:
Great write. Nicely done...
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On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
i challenge all the rhyme haters on this site to read your work and not be affected. your structure is flawless. but enough about that...the language and imagery of this piece are sublime. this is an excellent write indeed.
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On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
truedark, lyrically, majestically excellent. I can't compliment your command of metre/rhyme/cadence enough - you weave it perfectly every time.
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On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
yeah what she said... I have to give major props to anyone who can pull off flow as seamlessly as you've done here. Excellent job. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, StAinedNblood
(27) wrote:
this is awesome, that is better than a lot of the poems and stuff I've read on here so far