She
By diavolessa
She-
...wakes up every morning,
like an innocent bitch, or...
like a blissful hooker,
after last night’s treat.
She-
...so “magical” it makes me vomit.
She-
...looked with adoration upon
the desiccated sperm,
everywhere in her body;
...in her lips, deep in her uterus,
on her hair, on esophagus’s wall.
She-
…”gorgeous” to the extreme
She-
…would scream her name,
her filthy name,
while the “unwashed” fingers,
like the tentacles of an arachnid,
explored the mysterious cracks in her body.
She-
…”virgin” till the end of times.
She-
…dreamed of masculine silhouettes
by her side, on the old bed.
She-
…Could only find worn pelts
on her overused body.
She-
…chewed birth control pills
every night, to get protected, from herself.
She-
…”revolting” to perversity.
Comments on "She"
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On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Made me cringe inwardly.. ew. Nicely done.
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
quite interesting.
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On Thursday, June 12, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
seems to me a necessary evil, somthing you must do, for a desired end.....none the less a beautiful and articulate poem,well done............urban
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A former member wrote:
really like this & feel piece.great work!
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On Thursday, March 27, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i'll leave another comment, cause it's as a fresh poem again... great write, speaks of babylon's children playing in the reek.
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A former member wrote:
Disturbingly wonderful.
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On Monday, March 17, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
that was disturbing... perfect for darkpoetry!
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On Friday, March 14, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
great read...different way of writting...keep it up
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
nice piece ... i love the imagination that you stapled to the concept of this write .. much respect
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
woa, a little graphic there buddy, but maybe that's what makes it good. Great job. Later.
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
ewww, i am sticky and taking a step back. good writing.