Comments by DoctorAsh
- "Oh man, I dont know what to say Ive never read a poem quite like this. I could very easily say the wrong thing so I guess I'll say this. I've sacrificed myself to preserve my own humanity in a similar story, in the past. Once you build that character in yourself, you will always have it, and people will see it, and these stories will end. Just remember to be the smart one. Great write friend. D&A "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "The Beast Inside" by devilsrighthand
- "Thats kind of sick, like public restroom toilet water sprinkling your hands because of how powerful your stream is sick. Anyway, I think I get the gist of this, christmas needs to be lynched by an angry mob of business men who carry shadows. "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Sadistic Christmas" by Circe Avalon
- "Ahh, the great tale of consequence .. standing upon the teeder-todder of emotion, where the reward of happiness slightly out-wieghs the outcome of saddness. From this - is where a sliver of love is kept. Tremendous write. Daniel"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Fuck you. (an ode to love)" by stuart_pid
- "Man, I haven't read one your works in quite some time, and this is absolutely beautiful - it's so suttley painful as a distant injury is, beneath the skin, bruised, yet shrieking with pain ever time your hand passes over it to determine the range."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "oil to flame [and star studded ashes]" by Six-Out
- "Mr. Capt, I have always purpled hearted your angles on personal experiences and things. To give in on occasion, to bend your very own laws for someone else, is for them to be washed by your kindness, maybe. Nice type. Daniel"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "dollarblind" by capt_funguy
- "She finally climbs out of the little box thats been sitting in the corner. I have reason to believe your writing skills are impressified. Face it, you're married to poetry, everytime you come back here to post, you leave a smell behind.. like a coin smell"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "Beautiful write as always my friend, this piece definitely carried a large supply of warmth to those who bare the cold. On a positive note, this did restore a little bit of faith in humanity for me, a wonderful read to start the day."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "CARING IS A DEATH SENTENCE(about nothing)" by TheDismantled
- "This is rather elequant, with the two alternative self prospectives, I like the idea of you being the angel that you speak of in the end of this piece, "she holds all the answers
but she'll never have it all." is you. I hope."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "ashes to the ocean floor" by denver nitze
- "I love your face. Thats why I wear scubba gear to bed, so the frosty fat ice cream cone kids and their cartoon languages stay on the outside of the glass .. splendid script my friend. good night."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "a Vicious invective" by TheDismantled
- "Very powerful script. I felt as though thou-ouses preacher's emence voice multiplied and echoed through the taverns of an east indian noodle shop. I could almost see you speaking this in front of millions of pilgrams, as they listened intently."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Kill the body and the head will die." by TheDismantled
- "Very fluffy piece - Let us agree. Let us also agree to let them prepare us for a very long life of utter uncertainty - certianly, on a social and individual level - With this piece I love you. And flutes deserve nothing from us but boot chips."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Brutal" by zanewill
- "Very butter-if-full. We are glad to have died, and we are pleased to be of the fallen. Powerful write my friend, tis about god-damned time you post shit- To dream is a worth to die for - To die is a worth to sympathize for. Excellent."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "To each." by TheDismantled
- "emotions unfold into a reminder that too many of us go without a single notice sometimes, a single notice that could make a world of difference, but is simply bypassed by a world that remains isolated by inopportune devices. Much love. Daniel"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Some Sort of Lovely (revised)" by Dei
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