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Aged Poetry
By CharlottesWeb
Just a bit weary.
Quiet and softly,
Gathering words.
Recalling connections,
Pulsing to rhythms,
So few truly heard.
Scanning scripted emotions,
Strung from tormented ages,
No more in existence.
Tearing away from the spine,
Page after page of faded lamentations.
Creations chronicle of an ineffable recital,
Experiences forge for perception.
Vestiges of a journeys inspiration.
Just a bit weary.
Quiet and smoothly,
Casting away words.
Recollections and connections,
Which long ago pulsed to rhythms,
Only I truly heard.
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Copyright 2003 JM
Published on Monday, June 2, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
The beautiful thing about poetry is that no matter how much it evolves, it is still such a beautiful thing. Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day, dearie. Very well deserved! Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
JustMe, Great Title, Sometimes you cant be justyou,
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On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467)
wrote:
wow just me, i'm glad i'm finely catching up, i miss the old day's my death's whisper
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A former member wrote:
Your style is so original and refreshing. Any time I'm in need of a good dose of beauty I know just where to turn and this piece was no different. Like the end of the struggle and coming out dry, very well done. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
strong melencholy, a perfectly aged memory, spoken so well.........well done.....urban
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On Monday, October 27, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
brilliant write...
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, Storm
(143) wrote:
I agree with Monkey... Brilliant. JustBrilliant.
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A former member wrote:
i like all your works...keep it up!!! :)
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A former member wrote:
Truly beautiful. This is my first piece after taking a long break from writing poetry and I must say, it makes it all worthwhile to come back and find something so simple but with so much essence. Well done... well done.
-SP
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On Sunday, June 22, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
You don't fit you stand out. I LOVE your poetry and this one is wonderful, one of the best. There is no classification for what is dark poetry, and your poems are a part of dp. Much
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
You can never leave dp D-W.. there is too much love here for you [] you cant delete that from the emotional side of you.... without it hurting justa little . [And brilliant write] i might +add': Only I truly heard< Beautiful.[D&A]
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
you're words rings with a rythmical quality, and the emotion you put forth more than makes you worthy enough to stay here at this place, i know i'd miss you if you left ~CFS
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On Thursday, June 5, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
This is a very good piece! You fit in just fine - there aren't any rules, just write what you feel and let other people worry about "categorising" you, if they wish. Your writing just keeps getting better! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
I really like this poem!!! Do you have any more poems or lyrics cause if so the are probably very good to. Keep up the writing. Soon others will agree, this is good.
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On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I like Aged Poetry. This is a great write . . . and I agree with gothic . . . there is room for so much more than just dark here. You more than fit in.. you are the essence of DP. I love your poetry.
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On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
personally I like Aged "Poetry" the best.. it has a sorta ring to it. And NO you better not be leaving, or thinking of it too! it's just not allowed.
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On Tuesday, June 3, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
I love all your works. Plus I’d like to think DP isn’t just for the dark, but for the insightful and intelligent and believe me, that's where you fit in. As always, ~gohthic~
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