Chaos

By cre

The situation's normal
The people are just fine
The chaos is inside me
It's fucking up my mind

Spinning out of touch
Forget reality
They say the world makes sense
The insanity's in me

The walls are shifting in and out
And I wonder what you mean
And I even have to question
If what is real is what I've seen

But then I keep on spinning
And I know that I am right
Fuck you all I've got it down
With amazing clarity of sight

The situation's normal
The people are just fine
And I really don't give a shit
If they think I've lost my mind

Cause now my world is spinning
And now my world is flying
And I just dance ecstatically
Even though you say I'm dying

I try to keep on dancing
Tired but can't stop spinning
But finally it spits me out
And leaves me lost at the beginning

The situation's normal
The people were just fine
Withering to the ground
I hear you say I lost my mind

Now I'm just too tired
And I wonder what you mean
And I wonder where I was
And I wonder what you've seen

You say that I was spinning
But exhausted I just cry
And I wonder why I'm stupid
And I wish that I could die

The situation's normal
The people were just fine
But that was just the day before
I finally lost my mind

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Published on Friday, March 14, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Chaos"

On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Blackdenim7 referred me to "The Chaos" but I guess this might be it. Greatly enjoyed the brush strokes with a reality shifting in and out of focus perhaps. Last stanza was superb, thanks.
A former member wrote: this is ABSOLUTELY amazing!!
A former member wrote: wow, all of your poetry is really moving, and very emotional, keep it up
A former member wrote: I'd like to show this poem to everyone who's ever called me insane; I can't explain it nearly as well as you did.
On Saturday, January 3, 2004, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

Rarely, but ineptly every once in a while, I happen upon a poem that creates too much thought and too much feeling to exclaim about in this little box. All I can really say is, my god...you explained it all so well. It all came out so wonderfully and made
On Saturday, January 3, 2004, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

since and I can't beleive you did it. Every poem I've ever written has been an attempt to hint at one aspect or another of what you've done here. I'm just in awe. Wow. How'd I miss this for so long? ~shakes head~ wow. ~JMDW~
A former member wrote: you think as i do... thats probably why i have loved every one of your works so far. :)
A former member wrote: Do I really need to say what I think of your stuff by now? :P Great work.
A former member wrote: I like it...it flows really well.
A former member wrote: i love it all of it , it is mine i tell you, mine **hugs poem**
On Saturday, March 15, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106) wrote:

great one, I especially like the ending
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Sinnocence (49) wrote:

wow. friggin brilliant. *sigh* i love it *
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Godot (22) wrote:

"If what is real is what I've seen" that's an effin' brilliant line. i've looked over some of your other work and i'm rather impressed. well done. kudos to you. yourfredastaire@yahoo.com
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

cre, i think it's great that you corrected his spelling. you show that fuck. ;-) hehe... oh, yea, the poem. gee. no, really, good work... i'm listening to nin talk about 'myself keeps slipping away' this poem is like dat
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

damn both of you strait to barbra striesands house. Thats what i think.
On Friday, March 14, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

strait? *chuckle*
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

whatever. you suck. i hate you. :p
On Friday, March 14, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

you know you love me
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

I will kill you. one day.
A former member wrote: great poem... nice six nice..."your" just asking for insults to come "strait" to ya lol j/k hehe just jokin six.. great poem cre,,,
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Heh. I like it. That explains alot though. I mean I thought you were just super slow, but no, your relly insane. lol. Great job, later.
On Friday, March 14, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

I'm sorry for being a smartass. you know your still my buddy :)
On Friday, March 14, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

niiiice try ... you know insincere apologies run an extra 3 days debit ;) haha j/k. tnx for the comments. *you're* still my buddy too. ;)