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My Changes
By AppleDumpling
Going back in time
Is a pleasant thing to do
And remembering all my friends
And the things we use to do
The dances was held
In the old grange hall
And everyone was there
Some one would yell at old John
“Come and call the square”
The music wasn’t high class
But no one even cared
But time has passed
And everything has changed
It’s hard to think of all my friends
Now lying in their grave
But they will forever
Live in my mind
Until I pass away
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© 2006 AppleDumpling
Published on Sunday, December 10, 2006.
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On Thursday, March 15, 2012, CharlottesWeb
(511)
wrote:
She was my best friend. She was my other mother. She was my grandma. She was my confident. She was the one person I could rely on. Some people are supportive. Other people avoid me. Some people (my friends) are hurt that I'm not leaning on them. I don't want to lean on anybody...I don't deserve it. Grandma, how can it be true? How can you really be gone? Why didn't I say goodbye or I love you that morning? Do you hate me now? Do you resent me? Do you still love me? I love you.
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On Monday, May 11, 2009, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
:::sniffle::: I guess you were wrong, I guess I was too. Our mind is such a delicate thing...one little blood clot...too much time lost...and POOF!! Stories, lives, people...vanish from memory like they were never there. This makes me so sad to read grandma...so sad.
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On Thursday, December 4, 2008, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
I would not be surprised if we are like the universe without beginning or end just the illussion of it here in the flesh.. This is warm and Beautifully RAW... I love it ~669~
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On Thursday, July 12, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
I think thats a good way to see things, gone, but not forgotten. =) What a wonderfully lovely write.
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On Friday, May 18, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Agreed. This is beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful. What a solemn yet wise documentation of change and evolution. Lovely. ....-samone
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A former member wrote:
All that was beautiful. I loved the last stanza. I think everybody can relate to this piece of poetry in many ways. We have all had friends come and go either in a passing or just drifting away.
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A former member wrote:
Welcome to DP. I have you are here to stay and I look forward to reading more poetry from you. ][ ][
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A former member wrote:
Its simple and complex at the same time. Im sorry for your past friends, id imagine life must have been great back then. Society has lost respect for such things. Thanks for this =]
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
I love the title with this poem. I didnt pay much notice to it untill after reading the poem, and in that way it realy did put this lovely poem in perspective - Tiger
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On Friday, January 5, 2007, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
So sad, yet sweet all the time. It's good to concentrate on the good memories. A lovely piece.
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On Thursday, December 28, 2006, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
"And the things we use to do/The dances was held/In the old grange hall" I loved the dialect of those lines and the piece as a whole was beautiful and evocative.
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On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"The music wasn't high class, but no one even cared" Harry Turtledove prose. Loved this. Kudos.
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On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
*smiles saddly* isn't that the truth as i look back at the different paths my friends and i have taken and i miss the old days and i'm still so young. the wrok is well written and it shows that you have been writting for years it is an honor to have you h
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On Wednesday, December 20, 2006, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
an honor to have you here
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
Agreed, We are soo young yet, and can already see the many different paths we have taken. Wonderful Write, just dont forget that the younger ones do still like to listen, so share on and those memories will live for longer than you can imagine. -Heather
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
I still find it so hard to accept sometimes, the surreal feeling of those gone before me, I shall never touch again in my life...others I just wonder...Feel I'm living life with a chunk out of it. Look forward to seeing more.
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A former member wrote:
This was a sad piece but still very good. Nicely done and welcome. ~Bry~
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On Sunday, December 10, 2006, veingo
(532) wrote:
This is pleasent, in spite of it's sadness. Welcome to DP. ^V^
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