Auroras Power of Poetry

By CharlottesWeb




Auroras hour creeps between all thought and realized time.

Smiling, she rises gently nudging down nights navy color.

Enlisting creations warm touch in soothing transference.

Igniting awareness for all life living or simply existing.



Original spirited song, sung by the first roused chick,

Inspiring natural unification in natures gracing chorus.

Drawled yawns hitched in studded twitching stretches.

Affectionate connections among mother, dew and fawn.



Devote routines, novel in absorptions theme and notion.

Actions quiet and still in a gathering warm audience.

Hearts and breaths, blinks and sighs in existence, cease.

Hush hurries anxiety as beauty’s chaos readies release.



Sudden and strong, a rockets fire in deadened darkness,

Joy channels a mixed timbre of shouts and adoration!

Startled interchanging ribbons of flaming reds and oranges

Overtake azure sky, dispersing color to every currents path.



Genesis bleeds soft pinks and purples that lacquer forever.

Molding wonder, gently stroking white puffs of imagination.

Strong streaks of gold stretch from sights stationary scope,

Reaching colorless lands as a tonic, inflicting creation.



Heart beats, caressed whispers of life and love, begin again,

One lone blue pushes illuminations paint from hopeful view.

Monotonies skip of social thought and inner talk, un-pause.

Sensation lapses until the next sunrise the next perfect poem.






















This is a comparison of the perfect gloriousness of a dawn as a metaphor to the beautifulness of writing poetry…the absolute power of creation and feeling one holds over life it’s self while writing a poem.







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Copyright 2003 JM
Published on Wednesday, June 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this is a beautiful piece very calming and soothing

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, April 27, 2007, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    I thought i would leave you a little note to say I read this work or yous again and to let you know that it inspires me as much now as it did when you first wrote it

  • A former member wrote: fantastic flow of words

  • aXe FactoR On Saturday, June 12, 2004, aXe FactoR (335)By person wrote:

    wow, nice play of words spun into perfection. beautiful piece indeed. -MeL-

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    a new dawn and a new peom, ending both at sunset, and then a new begins the next dawn, that is what i think as i read this, well done

  • diavolessa On Monday, June 23, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    oh my this is beautiful. I really don't know what to say to this...

  • SeekingNirvana On Thursday, June 19, 2003, SeekingNirvana (29)By person wrote:

    excellent piece. wow. you are very good at this..

  • IceDragoness On Thursday, June 19, 2003, IceDragoness (195)By person wrote:

    gorgeous, I love it, this is kinda like what my mom told me when i asked her why she gave me my name, it made me cry ~Dawn

  • Stranger On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    Yes, this is stunning.

  • manywalks On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Stunning indeed, DW, one of your best. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: this is amazing...hats off to you :)

  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    [WOW] gollie .. um,: through the neverending twistings of your mind you pull us. From afar a speck = to Up close' where you can feel the texture of the beasts breath: The details you implanted here would take literaly hours to dissect: Brilliant write[D&A

  • cre On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    ohhh, wow. this needs a moment of silence ... stunning. your use of words is absolutely unparalleled. Truly. Wonderful write. *breathless, speechless*

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, June 18, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    wow...all i can say is wow...i love it and agree w/ everyone on this poems beauty and sweet truth. great job awesome write

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