the stars the moon and the midnight sky (beggining to our end)

By Darkest_Addiction

the stars the moon and the midnight sky
i sit and watch them go bye

we sit out in an open field
the time just slips its so unreal

the things i thought we'd do
the things that we've been through

but it's alright it's ok
cuz tomorrows just another day

i lay back down you hold me close
we both know that this is our end

the magics gone our love has faded
but just for tonight we'll pretend it isn't over

as we await the dawn of our end we sit and watch
the stars the moon and the midnight sky

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© 2006 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Sunday, February 5, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • gnrrain On Saturday, July 24, 2010, gnrrain (19)By person wrote:

    Nicely done, short, to the point, yet maintaining a sadness throughout.

  • Mistress Shadow On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    This gave me goosebumps. Very very beautiful! ~T

  • A former member wrote: I loved the rhyme scheme. And the unknown emotion kept me wondering.

  • stargaze0991 On Sunday, February 5, 2006, stargaze0991 (11)By person wrote:

    This is very good... i love the nightsky and my boyfriend is going to be leaving in a few months for the army, we watch the stars, this touched me. Sadness dripped over me when i read it. Thank you for this. Bridget

  • Ozymandias On Sunday, February 5, 2006, Ozymandias (35)By person wrote:

    Awesome! I love this. It's happy and sad, and I cant describe it but I really enjoyed it.

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