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the stars the moon and the midnight sky (beggining to our end)
By Darkest_Addiction
the stars the moon and the midnight sky
i sit and watch them go bye
we sit out in an open field
the time just slips its so unreal
the things i thought we'd do
the things that we've been through
but it's alright it's ok
cuz tomorrows just another day
i lay back down you hold me close
we both know that this is our end
the magics gone our love has faded
but just for tonight we'll pretend it isn't over
as we await the dawn of our end we sit and watch
the stars the moon and the midnight sky
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© 2006 Erin mae mcavoy
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, gnrrain
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wrote:
Nicely done, short, to the point, yet maintaining a sadness throughout.
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
This gave me goosebumps. Very very beautiful! ~T
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A former member wrote:
I loved the rhyme scheme. And the unknown emotion kept me wondering.
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, stargaze0991
(11) wrote:
This is very good... i love the nightsky and my boyfriend is going to be leaving in a few months for the army, we watch the stars, this touched me. Sadness dripped over me when i read it. Thank you for this. Bridget
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, Ozymandias
(29) wrote:
Awesome! I love this. It's happy and sad, and I cant describe it but I really enjoyed it.
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