Accolades Relinquished (The Making of an Effigy)

By glasshouse

Smoke lingers
In the thickness of the air
And she finds herself
Exhaling
More than she took in.

It’s complicated.
To love a gypsy,
Like a Roman graveyard prostitute.
To crave her body
Mind, and essence.

The desire
To savagely change her.

Because she
Will never
Stay with you.
(Or anyone.)



The wind has ceased.
As if the whole earth
Holds her breath,
Waiting for acquiescence
That will never grace her face.

And she is statuesque.
Not in artistic infamy,
But because she’s made of stone.
(The sort that will stand
The test of time,
And all those who would try
To break her)



(That is to say…. you.)


So cast your foolish notions
At the bottom of her pedestal,
And leave them there.


Your unrequited love
Will worship at her feet.




It is, after all, the smallest sacrifice
One could make
To such an exquisite creation.




An excruciating compromise,
I know.

I loved her
From the moment I created her...
And even I have never held her
To this day.

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© 2007 glasshouse
Published on Sunday, September 16, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Morbid_insanity On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Morbid_insanity (74)By person wrote:

    wow this was really something else. not the sort of thing you can just read once. im not even sure i fully grasped everything you were giving but it was definitely beautiful

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, October 1, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    It’s complicated. To love a gypsy .. Blew my mind. Cous I've had many poetic ingame session with Nadir about gypsies

  • Dommi On Friday, September 21, 2007, Dommi (95)By person wrote:

    i am in love with this piece, definitely a favorite.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, September 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    viiiiii vvvviiiiid.... yeah, vivid... wow. i have to come back to this.

  • NikesRain On Monday, September 17, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    beautiful in its flow and emotions... deeply pulling and grasping, wrapping around the heart to where it almost can't breathe, but it does... ever so gently so... amazing

  • capt_funguy On Monday, September 17, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    this really is gorgeous, - raise the eyebrows , close the book, heavy sigh and now they know. wonderfully complete with the last stanza assuring the sentiment... sweet - funguy

  • sIo On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    perhaps because i am the witness, not the audience, neither here, nor there....never really black and white, just expression within the gray scale.... this is when i wish words spoke actions...

  • sIo On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    ...where i could speak love, if only as a character...and know you truly felt the act....this is one of the most deeply woven pieces you've written....you once said i write for you, darling, you're the one who writes...for me.

  • sIo On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    i wish i had a box of glow in the dark stars that i could put up on your walls and for every time like this when i wish i could show you what you've done to me through your words...i'd put a star up on your wall...

  • sIo On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    and wish for it to fall for you...so when you feel unloved or sad....just rip down a star and know that someone's wished their love for you...

  • glasshouse On Sunday, September 16, 2007, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    You're the sweetest person who ever existed. I adore you. Thanks, babe. --Jes

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