Accolades Relinquished (The Making of an Effigy)
By glasshouse
Smoke lingers
In the thickness of the air
And she finds herself
Exhaling
More than she took in.
It’s complicated.
To love a gypsy,
Like a Roman graveyard prostitute.
To crave her body
Mind, and essence.
The desire
To savagely change her.
Because she
Will never
Stay with you.
(Or anyone.)
The wind has ceased.
As if the whole earth
Holds her breath,
Waiting for acquiescence
That will never grace her face.
And she is statuesque.
Not in artistic infamy,
But because she’s made of stone.
(The sort that will stand
The test of time,
And all those who would try
To break her)
(That is to say…. you.)
So cast your foolish notions
At the bottom of her pedestal,
And leave them there.
Your unrequited love
Will worship at her feet.
It is, after all, the smallest sacrifice
One could make
To such an exquisite creation.
An excruciating compromise,
I know.
I loved her
From the moment I created her...
And even I have never held her
To this day.
Awards
Comments on "Accolades Relinquished (The Making of an Effigy)"
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2008, Morbid_insanity
(74) wrote:
wow this was really something else. not the sort of thing you can just read once. im not even sure i fully grasped everything you were giving but it was definitely beautiful
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On Monday, October 1, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
It’s complicated. To love a gypsy .. Blew my mind. Cous I've had many poetic ingame session with Nadir about gypsies
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On Friday, September 21, 2007, Dommi
(95) wrote:
i am in love with this piece, definitely a favorite.
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On Monday, September 17, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
viiiiii vvvviiiiid.... yeah, vivid... wow. i have to come back to this.
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On Monday, September 17, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
beautiful in its flow and emotions... deeply pulling and grasping, wrapping around the heart to where it almost can't breathe, but it does... ever so gently so... amazing
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On Monday, September 17, 2007, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
this really is gorgeous, - raise the eyebrows , close the book, heavy sigh and now they know. wonderfully complete with the last stanza assuring the sentiment... sweet - funguy
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
perhaps because i am the witness, not the audience, neither here, nor there....never really black and white, just expression within the gray scale.... this is when i wish words spoke actions...
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
...where i could speak love, if only as a character...and know you truly felt the act....this is one of the most deeply woven pieces you've written....you once said i write for you, darling, you're the one who writes...for me.
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
i wish i had a box of glow in the dark stars that i could put up on your walls and for every time like this when i wish i could show you what you've done to me through your words...i'd put a star up on your wall...
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
and wish for it to fall for you...so when you feel unloved or sad....just rip down a star and know that someone's wished their love for you...
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On Sunday, September 16, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
You're the sweetest person who ever existed. I adore you. Thanks, babe. --Jes