Comments by Morbid_insanity
- "i loved the way you opened this, the flow was awesome. the rest was good too, i just really liked that part "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Empty" by Audrey_Star
- ""the stars might stop breathing as bright". that has to be my favorite line out of this. it keeps me coming back, you really are a brilliant writer "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "she spoke pearl" by Six-Out
- "i loved the rawness of it. even in your metaphors you still are very abrupt. and your style of writing reminds me of my own a lot, it helps me get more into your mindset and at the same time you leave no room for your target to miss your delivery. "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Scribbling out Oxygen" by Demosthenes
- "this is the kind of work that really sticks. it puts life into an entirely new perspective. i almost cried while reading this, probably becuase of more personal matters but nevertheless, this was a spectacular work."
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "It Should Have Been Better" by cre
- "its so odd that this was be written in an attempt to make bad poetry. i found humorous and just enjoyable to read. idk i can be a little absent minded at times. but congrats nevertheless "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Penguin Feathers" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "there is something about this that im not quite getting. i feel like there is something underlying that im not grasping but this was a nice write nevertheless. I guess ill just have to read it again later"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Returnity" by sole
- "its really kinda hard to read this cause its like someone is writing my life. it hurts, but the rawness is beautiful. its wierd i love the write even though its slightly painful to read"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "imperfect" by KittyStryker
- "okay, im not really quite sure i understood what was going on here. for me there where a plethora of images being used but i found it hard to find the consistency. the style of this reminds me a lot of Gertrude Stein "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "sleep walk cooking dream dance sitting" by WhoIAM
- "this is really interesting cuase i feel like im here, like still opening m eyes, and keeping myself from living. this was nice :)"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "old oceans" by Six-Out
- "this has to be like the tenth time i read this but, i got something different this time. like i get the beauty but i also get a sense of sorrow that just exudes. it made me a little teary. still just as beautiful though"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "she spoke pearl" by Six-Out
- "hmmm... this was... very entertaining, though im not sure who the anger is directed towards. or perhaps you just rally want that coffee lol"
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Java HotSpot" by odetobarbie
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