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I Made Love With Clothes On
By Mylissa
I always made love to him with clothes on.
safety intertwined in the fabric of heat.
a forecast unknown—would it rain
{or} would it snow.
“our” dreams left exposed.
And he began to dip my heart in fondue.
eating away my defenses like
Hannibal Lector- receding only
to chew.
Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats.
seconds. moments. he plunged so deep.
as I thirst for his words to
tongue tie my wrists.
And his lips to lacerate edges that twist-
forming sexu-ality. taming
spiritu-ality. until I ached
to pray {only to him}.
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© 2007 Mylissa
Published on Sunday, February 25, 2007.
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, carlosjackal
(2788)
wrote:
Still a knockout..
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A former member wrote:
i love this
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A former member wrote:
Your work always brings a touch of reality into the complex associations you develop.... unique phraseology, stylistically advanced in trope, in turns... well written... love the touch of the spiritual in this hot, devouring piece. Congrats on POTD!
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, DIATRICUS
(64) wrote:
wonderful stuff -- especially enjoyed "I thirst for his words to tongue tie my wrists."
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A former member wrote:
I still love coming back to this...
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On Thursday, October 4, 2007, bpathos
(77) wrote:
"Tongue tie my wrists" and "the heart fondue" ... I like these. Wow this list looks like a phone book...
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
not to harp on my last comment, but... coronarily delicious
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
"receding only to chew"the whole poem was brilliant but I loved this line.
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I had to come back to this. Its beautiful. Very well written. Amazing imagery. An excellent read every time. I cant get tired of it. Beautiful. -Jes
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On Saturday, March 24, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
You nicely illustrated that sometimes making love with your clothes can be subtle, but sexual too. ~T
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On Friday, March 2, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Nice! I like the imagery of having your heart dipped in fondue, "tongue tie my wrists" also creates a great mental picture. Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, March 2, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
look at you kiddo :) you are evolving every write, finding yourself and ripping yourself open, sewing shut, and ripping open all over again, you are trully finding youre niche
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A former member wrote:
You are totally amazing. Please, keep on writing, the hunger is greater as to read your works!
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On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Oh my god.. this is one of your strongest pieces yet. I absolutely loved the second stanza, like you wouldn't believe.. I wish I could say more, but this is just stunning dearest. It's always a pleasure to read you.
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A former member wrote:
"tongue tie my wrists. And his lips to lacerate edges that twist-" There is a Poe-esque tinntinnabulation that rings, beats, pulses in this sexual-cum-Hannibal poem. i can feel the fabric of your wordHeat{heatedWords}. Sizzzzz-!
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
what can i say that hasnt already been said?...this was brilliant..and you are one sexy Libra ;)
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
this speaks to me in so many ways.. you are such an inspiration
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
Ooh la la. What a brilliant write. "Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats" is my favorite line. Amazing stuff. You get a brownie :D
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
*favs* i can say no more. --Jes
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A former member wrote:
This is by far the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Blown away on so many levels right now...
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A former member wrote:
this goes beyond words of praise or awe...amazing write.
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A former member wrote:
Ohhhh this is good. Way too good
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
tastes like ice-cream ~b
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
mmmmmmm ice cream.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
"eating away my defenses like Hannibal Lector- receding only to chew" sinister sweet *grins* oh i love this.
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A former member wrote:
...dip my heart in fondue...tongue tie my wrists...god! you are amazing!
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
The more I read this and become indulged the more horny and aroused I become at the gorgeous surrender portrayed in this piece...gorgeous and wretched, yet so raw and sexual..:)
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
deadly heart pounding poetry, with a slight nightmare shiver runing on my spine.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, LOKI
(161) wrote:
so amazing.You have a way with your words that I cant explain.I see the writers block went away.Beautiful write Mylissa.Muaahz
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A former member wrote:
i really loved the opening stanza..i've read this a few times now, and i don't really know what to say. this was strangely beautiful, like a painting with bloody edges, yet it can never erase the lonely scenes..wonderful job.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
This is intense stuff.. lots of lines stood out..'safety intertwined in the fabric of heat' 'tasting pain wrapped in static beats' again.. truly wonderful.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
I really loved "And he began to dip my heart in fondue. eating away my defenses like Hannibal Lector" because it stood out and made sense to me. this was really good to read.
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A former member wrote:
wow, this has to be one of my favorites of yours. nicely done. ~ red.
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