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I Crave The Ache
By veingo
Come out & play
I'm not afraid
Don't make me wait
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Make me want
for nothing more
make me adore
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My sense of insecurity
Beat
into me
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Come play a game
of placeing blame
make me ashamed
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PLEASE!!!
Make me a toy
a whipping boy
you can enjoy
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Come again
and grind your sin
into my skin
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Go on and carve
a wicked scar
across my heart
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Then leave me bound
and beaten down
just like you found
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ME!!!!
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.PLEASE
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.ME
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.PLEASE.... ME....
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PLEASE ME!!!!
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© 2006 veingo
Published on Monday, March 6, 2006.
Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and
"Lyrics"
Comments on "I Crave The Ache"
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A former member wrote:
Me too, me too! :)
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A former member wrote:
Wow, a man after my own heart, I also crave the ache.
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On Thursday, November 1, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434)
wrote:
Naughty boy* swings on the goatee, slips and grabs other dangly bits.
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A former member wrote:
Oh MIAOW!!
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
I love this.You made me smile.Thankyou I needed that.
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On Friday, December 1, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Ughhhh you are right, this is mine!!! I love it!
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A former member wrote:
please me, PLEASE ME PLEASE ME !!! Woot I Love It ][ ][
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
psychological or sexual this gave me shivers, theres so much yearning in your words, a raw ache that begs to be rubbed...great write ~kristy
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On Friday, March 30, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
psstt i still think this is wonderful :)
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On Thursday, March 16, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(62) wrote:
yow....loved it. intense and a little naughty
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A former member wrote:
WOW! awesome flow here V, wasn't expecting it to ummm, 'come' out as it did for the ending..hehe*evil grin* I love it ~A~
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On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Thank god. You're my addiction. And I've just had my fix! :P This was amazing. I kinda made up my own beat in my head along with this. Very interesting structure- I like.
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, blake
(33) wrote:
to me it sounded like you were crying out for attention, like for once if only it was about you. hmmm interesting perspectives hehe.
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
You gutter minded FREAKS! That's not what I meant at all.
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
Then again, now that you mention it. Giggity Giggity Giggity! lol
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On Monday, March 20, 2006, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
gutter minded freak? ... oh Vein how you wound... *dramatic sigh* ;)
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On Tuesday, March 21, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
Aw come on, surely you know I meant that in the most loveing & respectful way. *wink*
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Wow! V you certainly know how to make a few knees go weak, among other parts. ;) This is freakin awesome. *Claps* Julia~
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
i'd rather think it more to adore without the beating down..but this...first thought was... Ohhh my ;)
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
I feel dirty now. =P Sometimes you just have to give in man. lol. cool. ~b
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A former member wrote:
I think I said something like that last line to some girl I met at the bar last weekend...I don't think I said it right. This is madly masochistic & powerful
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Wow that was nice Ron..You got a dirty side don't you ;)...I loved it was demanding and begging at the same time nice job mate
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A former member wrote:
ooo...dominatrix craving, are we? dirty, raunchy, and different...loved it
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
that quenchable thirst.....'....please me....'... i love th ending... very demanding in a please me Now sorta way;)
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A former member wrote:
this was intense..the rhyme scheme, interesting...this seemed to be different from your other writes, more erotic and in-your-face "please me"..lol..but i enjoyed it all the same.
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