I Crave The Ache

By veingo

Come out & play
I'm not afraid
Don't make me wait
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Make me want
for nothing more
make me adore
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My sense of insecurity
Beat
into me
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Come play a game
of placeing blame
make me ashamed
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PLEASE!!!

Make me a toy
a whipping boy
you can enjoy
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Come again
and grind your sin
into my skin
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Go on and carve
a wicked scar
across my heart
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Then leave me bound
and beaten down
just like you found
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ME!!!!
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.PLEASE
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.ME
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.PLEASE.... ME....
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PLEASE ME!!!!

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Published on Monday, March 6, 2006. Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Lyrics"

Comments on "I Crave The Ache"

A former member wrote: Me too, me too! :)
A former member wrote: Wow, a man after my own heart, I also crave the ache.
On Thursday, November 1, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423) wrote:

Naughty boy* swings on the goatee, slips and grabs other dangly bits.
A former member wrote: Oh MIAOW!!
On Thursday, December 14, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

I love this.You made me smile.Thankyou I needed that.
On Friday, December 1, 2006, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Ughhhh you are right, this is mine!!! I love it!
A former member wrote: please me, PLEASE ME PLEASE ME !!! Woot I Love It ][ ][
On Saturday, July 29, 2006, Sin (1135) wrote:

psychological or sexual this gave me shivers, theres so much yearning in your words, a raw ache that begs to be rubbed...great write ~kristy
On Friday, March 30, 2007, Sin (1135) wrote:

psstt i still think this is wonderful :)
On Thursday, March 16, 2006, Vicious Pixie (58) wrote:

yow....loved it. intense and a little naughty
A former member wrote: WOW! awesome flow here V, wasn't expecting it to ummm, 'come' out as it did for the ending..hehe*evil grin* I love it ~A~
On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, Err0r (358) wrote:

Thank god. You're my addiction. And I've just had my fix! :P This was amazing. I kinda made up my own beat in my head along with this. Very interesting structure- I like.
On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, blake (33) wrote:

to me it sounded like you were crying out for attention, like for once if only it was about you. hmmm interesting perspectives hehe.
On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, veingo (526) wrote:

You gutter minded FREAKS! That's not what I meant at all.
On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, veingo (526) wrote:

Then again, now that you mention it. Giggity Giggity Giggity! lol
On Monday, March 20, 2006, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

gutter minded freak? ... oh Vein how you wound... *dramatic sigh* ;)
On Tuesday, March 21, 2006, veingo (526) wrote:

Aw come on, surely you know I meant that in the most loveing & respectful way. *wink*
On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

Wow! V you certainly know how to make a few knees go weak, among other parts. ;) This is freakin awesome. *Claps* Julia~
On Monday, March 6, 2006, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

i'd rather think it more to adore without the beating down..but this...first thought was... Ohhh my ;)
On Monday, March 6, 2006, blue (1409) wrote:

I feel dirty now. =P Sometimes you just have to give in man. lol. cool. ~b
A former member wrote: I think I said something like that last line to some girl I met at the bar last weekend...I don't think I said it right. This is madly masochistic & powerful
On Monday, March 6, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

Wow that was nice Ron..You got a dirty side don't you ;)...I loved it was demanding and begging at the same time nice job mate
A former member wrote: ooo...dominatrix craving, are we? dirty, raunchy, and different...loved it
On Monday, March 6, 2006, elisa (1595) wrote:

that quenchable thirst.....'....please me....'... i love th ending... very demanding in a please me Now sorta way;)
A former member wrote: this was intense..the rhyme scheme, interesting...this seemed to be different from your other writes, more erotic and in-your-face "please me"..lol..but i enjoyed it all the same.