Comments by Lady Grinning Soul
- "Are you by chance the Tick Tock man? No? Well, this reminded me of him.
I really enjoyed the fact that the meter is mostly even and the rhymes don't sound forced when read out loud. "
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "Tick-Tock" by Nemo
- "The leadup of this was great, but the last three stanzas blew me away in their intensity and emotion. Bitterness and anger are the two emotions I pick up, with an underlying bit of acceptance and enjoyment (perhaps due to the destruction??) at the end."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "apokaluptÅ" by Devil-lyn
- "I read this a few hours ago and held off commenting because I couldn't think of anything to say.
I still can't think of anything to say, other than this made my halloween night."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "barbara" by Devil lyn
- "The play on words is done very well and the rhyming isn't forced and flows naturally. I also chuckled at the fact that it's a play on Psalms. I look forward to reading more of your work. Oh, and, welcome to DP."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "i, Devil~lyn" by Devil lyn
- "The imagery in this is just... amazing... and the last line... I think the last line is what did it for me. You paint a repeating cycle perfectly with your pen."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "Dream" by harlequinn
- "The flow of the piece and the transitioning of the piece is breathtaking and the imagery throughout the piece made me feel as if I were looking into someones dreamscape and experiencing their emotions... so vivid.. I have missed your works tremendously. "
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "She is," by Echoes of Orpheus
- ""....and the absurdity of it all
is staring her right in the face..."
was my favorite part... i read it to myself... and then i had to read it outloud... and the quoted part just screamed out at me.....
well written.... and welcome to DP"
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "slow talk" by ButterflyCity
- "I loved the visual pictures I got in my mind. Whenever I read anything by you, I can see what you are writing, its odd, but its true. Also, I think the dashes at the end of most of your lines work well, because i naturally pause when i get to those and it gives me a moment to think about what has been written."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "Schizophrenia" by HeadpatSlut
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