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spring wind strays , rinses and dyes the leaves
morning is stirred and wilts overnight

I will keep you cold

crawl nearer.

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Published on Sunday, February 23, 2014. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "sno"

On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette (1087) wrote:

"morning is stirred and wilts overnight" ........what a line
On Sunday, December 28, 2014, Lady Grinning Soul (143) wrote:

Simply elegant. The useage and placement of everything.... divine... and worthy of poem of the day.
A former member wrote: so elegant! i like the use of space, the awareness of the placement of the words...feels so crisp and fresh, almost oddly aromatic? thank you for writing â™¡
On Tuesday, May 13, 2014, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

feels like wakeing up to late april snow with the window open, a fleeting feeling that stays with you.
On Sunday, May 4, 2014, Poetic-Realm (253) wrote:

This....... THIS!!!!
A former member wrote: Loved this one...haiku darkness, with a hint of green like a magical forest, or the forest of an exhibition, in a strange, unique museum...loved it.
On Sunday, February 23, 2014, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...I like the green in your poem, the gentle rain...
On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, anaksunamun (88) wrote:

Thankyou for reading â™¡
On Sunday, February 23, 2014, soul_versing (774) wrote:

Beautiful depth in this haiku. The cold preserves the inner beauty within and it should be cherished. This made me smile with all its elegance. Hello there poet and welcome to the valley... If you need help with anything I'm only an email away. Bows-
On Friday, February 28, 2014, anaksunamun (88) wrote:

Thankyou â™¡