She is,
By Echoes of Orpheus
She was spectral,
Transcendent,
A member of an
Undeserving dimension.
Beyond even
The dreams of us.
Us,
Bound to mortality,
To no promise
But that of death.
She was life.
She could instil in
Those drawing breath
The sensation of
Being alive.
Show us that
What we had been doing
Until the point we met her
Hadn't been living at all.
She was art;
In that you could
Recognize her beauty
But never be able to
Define it,
Never truly understand
The intricacies of
Her being.
Certainly not in words;
But to a poet
That is in itself beautiful,
The attempt to portray
Something that
No word sequence,
Symphony,
Or brush stroke
Could ever do justice.
She was infinite;
Boundless and
Universal
In that she was everything.
Nothing needed exist
Beyond her,
Any scenery paled behind her
To such an extent that
It ceased to be.
She was Celestial;
Not in that she belonged
To the heavens,
But in that they
Belonged to her.
She was the
Defining feature;
The required presence for
Heaven to be heaven at all.
Author's Note:
I am back, and yes, still writing romance.Comments on "She is,"
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On Thursday, November 20, 2014, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
The flow of the piece and the transitioning of the piece is breathtaking and the imagery throughout the piece made me feel as if I were looking into someones dreamscape and experiencing their emotions... so vivid.. I have missed your works tremendously.
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On Thursday, November 20, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
My words escaped each breath inhaled as it passed between my lips. I transitioned across a dreamscape so vivid so delicate that my mind fell in love as I tip-toed across each stanza. ...She was and she still is... a brilliant design in itself. Simply gorgeous read.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2014, Pride Ed
(107) wrote:
Why can't a dude write this stuff about me?? lol, great poem! C:
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2014, haunted
(837) wrote:
this is really good poetry, I love it!
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2014, drasticdaydreams
(55) wrote:
To hold this sort of wonder for a person reflects something rather beautiful in yourself.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2014, malevolencefixation
(22) wrote:
Wow. Whoever you wrote this about should be incredibly flattered. This is amazing and beautiful. Beyond words. Incredible