Ana
By Godot
Anaël's Waxen Pulse
*And thus he begged forget me not
But time passed on and she forgot...*
on the loneliest
of evenings
may *you* read this, all alone
when the emptiest
of emptiness
is dearly called your own
and fervently
beseeching you
to call to mind but once
that poets often
declare love
--like war-- on many fronts
a game of war quite
suited for
the dearest things we won't adore
the darkest
things we can't obscure
the saddest things we must endure
with words of hope we wish meant more
and on the loneliest
of nights
may you call to mind my sins
forgotten faults and
failings
and those wretched "might-have-been's"
remember
in your bleakest hour
when Fate claims yours the weakest tower
when day seems drear, and night, more dour
remember there
is one somewhere
who would suffer in your stead
--gladly--
just to tell you once
(and declare love on many fronts)
the
words he should have said
"should have said" could have led
to so much more than this
a simple word, and how absurd
to think it rhymes with bliss...
l
Awards
Comments on "Ana"
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On Tuesday, June 21, 2022, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Incredible work.One of those ones where simple hyperbole doesn’t do it justice.
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On Friday, January 6, 2017, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
This remains one of my absolute favourite pieces I've ever read on this site. Still, always, outstanding.
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On Thursday, September 21, 2017, Godot
(22) wrote:
glad to hear it still does something for you. hard to believe i wrote this over 15 years ago.
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On Sunday, May 10, 2020, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Given the years passed now, and how often I revisit this one, it stands as a contender for one of my favourite pieces of all time.
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On Sunday, May 10, 2020, Godot
(22) wrote:
you're too kind! check your mail on here
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On Sunday, May 10, 2020, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Not just here.
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On Sunday, August 28, 2016, Adagios
(716) wrote:
I read this over and over again, for years of grief. I can't thank you enough, wherever you are, don't ever turn away from your gift my friend.
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A former member wrote:
Always strongly along the same train of thought, taking a scenic route... I really enjoy your writing.
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On Friday, June 5, 2009, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
Rhyme never was my stong point...lucky you.wonderful.
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On Thursday, June 4, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Back yet again... *sighs* every time.
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On Sunday, July 13, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Back again, this poem is certainly among my top few favorites on this site. I just can't seem to stop reading it.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2008, Aleas
(169) wrote:
I hadn't been to this page in 5 years. When I decided to reconnect with this site, I was hoping to find this artist still here. I am deeply relieved to find this work and this poet/person/artist still available to read and enjoy. Thank you for many years ago, and thank you for today.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
A shame the author hasn't written in 4 years, this poem is... absolutely amazing, this poem goes so much further than I thought words could ever take me
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On Friday, November 2, 2007, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
This poem is truly amazing, I love it! Speechless, it was so good....
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A former member wrote:
this is a breathtaking poem that truly speaks to the depths of the souls of anyone who ever this kind of deep loss...wow! fav. list! ::truth::
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, cre
(410) wrote:
so incredible . . I can never, ever tire of reading you. You own rhyme.
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On Monday, May 3, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Indeed a well written poem this was. The ending.. superb. :::OLd
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On Monday, May 3, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
sheer rhyme and metre mastery, the point never forced or lost... magnificently well-executed piece that succeeds on every level. outstanding write.
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
you work with words masterfully. the rhyme and flow of your poems are a well woven silken web... of doom. thank you for your words, keep writing.
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A former member wrote:
excellent piece. surprised it hasn't received more comments...
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
indeed excellent.... remnants of Poe, i think. and although this has a feeling of utter hopelessness to it... i am left feeling almost... comforted...