Serpents to Snakes

By Kaleidoscope_Heart

Eternally entwined in a sadistic symphony,
The Serpents noosed themselves
Around her neck

Eyes
Emerald
And ravenous
As they met with hers

Vomiting a breath
Of fire, and ancient paradox
Of a self adorned pious lost
That they would, oh but soon, forget

The smog is dispersed
As their fork tongues immerse
Pricking her cheeks
A sarcastic kiss
With desire she plead
Until tears fell from her lips

Oh but her eyes were so still
Stoic and unbidding
To a will
Unfitting

Then she felt flickering
On her fingers
Where another serpent
Still lingers

He, adorning her face, whispers,
“ Ingrate,
Heathen,
Unchaste whore.”

And then another,
With lustful twilights in his eyes
Longing to devour
Her humanity

Still, her eyes unmoving
As her delicate hand clasps a head.
The others reduce to mere snakes in fear
As she brings the pitiful eyes to her face

He pleads,
“ My Dear
My Darling
My Mistress
My…”

And with the strength of her fingers, she crushes his skull
Smirking
“ Such pety pleas, as I am now God.”

The martyr marveled at how beautifully he bled from her hands
How sensual the venom felt on her wrists
As his body still writhed in vain

Her voice, lulling,
“ Oh but don’t forget, you live by the hand.”
As his skull decayed under her final tensed fist.

She kissed the remains
With a love
Unnamed

And with the venom now on her lips, she hissed,
“ Your veils, are vain. Your pious is lost, a paradox.
How dare you hide behind your cross.
You are but lowly serpents reduced to snakes
And it is by My hand you receive your fate.
I AM, your
Lovely
Assassin.”






- Kelly Lynn Noll

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© 2007 SilencedSiryn
Published on Sunday, October 11, 2015.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Thursday, November 5, 2015, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    There is so much to address here, but my absolute favorite is variety of tones throughout. And the iconic symbolism of fitted power from a simple push of a finger. Nice! Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    wow this is absolutely amazing :)

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    This is so entrancing, I felt like it took me somewhere else. Love it.

  • Devilish On Thursday, October 4, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    This is absolutely fucking amazing. wow. your verse is unbelievable. thank you for your comments I appreciate it. and I love your poetry.. Scholar

  • Alchemist On Tuesday, April 10, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    Your words are so driving, I love it. Very thought provoking.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Epic write!

  • A former member wrote: Very engaging. Sticklers for grammar will remind you that it should be 'piousness' and not just 'pious'. You've got some interesting imagery, thematic and somewhat epic. Might do to have it as a longer piece. Just an idea. -END

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Saturday, February 2, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    I fell into somewhat of a trance reading this... Lost in the words somehow, they spoke to me and I got lost into the world this poem created for a few moments. Very well done

  • Syringe On Sunday, January 27, 2008, Syringe (51)By person wrote:

    great poem. you changed it a bit. I espescially loved the ending. I AM-very god like, very powerful

  • blue On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ouch, incisively effective.. my only suggestion, change pious to piety, I think that is the correct usage. Oh, and pety is petty*. oop. Well played, welcome to DP. ~b

  • Eric On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    Loved this! You have a way with words. I look forward to your future posts!

  • Fantecstasy On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Fantecstasy (120)By person wrote:

    Very well done. I loved tone and language. Most impressed :)

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    same here

  • A former member wrote: exceptional beauty in this...the vivid imagery is still swirling madly inside my skull.

  • Taunting The Reaper On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    I think I love you! LOL! Great work, you're in the right place. I'm already a fan.

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