Serpents to Snakes
By Kaleidoscope_Heart
Eternally entwined in a sadistic symphony,
The Serpents noosed themselves
Around her neck
Eyes
Emerald
And ravenous
As they met with hers
Vomiting a breath
Of fire, and ancient paradox
Of a self adorned pious lost
That they would, oh but soon, forget
The smog is dispersed
As their fork tongues immerse
Pricking her cheeks
A sarcastic kiss
With desire she plead
Until tears fell from her lips
Oh but her eyes were so still
Stoic and unbidding
To a will
Unfitting
Then she felt flickering
On her fingers
Where another serpent
Still lingers
He, adorning her face, whispers,
“ Ingrate,
Heathen,
Unchaste whore.”
And then another,
With lustful twilights in his eyes
Longing to devour
Her humanity
Still, her eyes unmoving
As her delicate hand clasps a head.
The others reduce to mere snakes in fear
As she brings the pitiful eyes to her face
He pleads,
“ My Dear
My Darling
My Mistress
My…”
And with the strength of her fingers, she crushes his skull
Smirking
“ Such pety pleas, as I am now God.”
The martyr marveled at how beautifully he bled from her hands
How sensual the venom felt on her wrists
As his body still writhed in vain
Her voice, lulling,
“ Oh but don’t forget, you live by the hand.”
As his skull decayed under her final tensed fist.
She kissed the remains
With a love
Unnamed
And with the venom now on her lips, she hissed,
“ Your veils, are vain. Your pious is lost, a paradox.
How dare you hide behind your cross.
You are but lowly serpents reduced to snakes
And it is by My hand you receive your fate.
I AM, your
Lovely
Assassin.”
- Kelly Lynn Noll
Comments on "Serpents to Snakes"
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On Thursday, November 5, 2015, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
There is so much to address here, but my absolute favorite is variety of tones throughout. And the iconic symbolism of fitted power from a simple push of a finger. Nice!
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
wow this is absolutely amazing :)
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On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This is so entrancing, I felt like it took me somewhere else. Love it.
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On Thursday, October 4, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
This is absolutely fucking amazing. wow. your verse is unbelievable. thank you for your comments I appreciate it. and I love your poetry..
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On Tuesday, April 10, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Your words are so driving, I love it. Very thought provoking.
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Epic write!
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A former member wrote:
Very engaging. Sticklers for grammar will remind you that it should be 'piousness' and not just 'pious'. You've got some interesting imagery, thematic and somewhat epic. Might do to have it as a longer piece. Just an idea. -END
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On Saturday, February 2, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
I fell into somewhat of a trance reading this... Lost in the words somehow, they spoke to me and I got lost into the world this poem created for a few moments. Very well done
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, Syringe
(51) wrote:
great poem. you changed it a bit. I espescially loved the ending. I AM-very god like, very powerful
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On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
ouch, incisively effective.. my only suggestion, change pious to piety, I think that is the correct usage. Oh, and pety is petty*. oop. Well played, welcome to DP. ~b
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On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, Eric
(77) wrote:
Loved this! You have a way with words. I look forward to your future posts!
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Fantecstasy
(120) wrote:
Very well done. I loved tone and language. Most impressed :)
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
same here
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A former member wrote:
exceptional beauty in this...the vivid imagery is still swirling madly inside my skull.
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On Saturday, November 17, 2007, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
I think I love you! LOL! Great work, you're in the right place. I'm already a fan.