She bends her arms to look like wings.

By Armor for your life

I caught them
Eating her Wings
Trying to make her more "stable."

And taking away
What she has been graced with.

When all her feathers are gone,
I wonder if she will still reach for the sky
With that same look in her eyes.

That look that defines hope.

“Why can’t I taste the clouds anymore?”
She sings.

Now starting to realize her dilemma.
I fear she will bend her arms to look like wings,
And break them in her attempt.

Thus,
I will hold her up
So she never finds out what she has lost.
So she can still feel the breeze
Break against her body.

Because I can't picture the sky
With out the soft outline
Of her silhouette.

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© 2007 Armor for your life
Published on Friday, January 26, 2007.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Monday, November 13, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    I remember loving this piece previously, on an old account. I still love it.

  • Selenophile On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile (22)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece. I do hate when society tries to change people they deem different. Our differences make us beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: This piece... thank you for writing it... it is beautiful, moving and striking... it literally took my breath away. Amazing, amazing!

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    This is simply gorgeous. Every line is perfection.

  • A former member wrote: Amazing work, as to all of your poems! You inspire me alot when I write my poetry

  • A former member wrote: i love this poem so much

  • surething On Thursday, May 21, 2009, surething (51)By person wrote:

    this is a beautiful lament, truly beautiful in its capture of the feeling

  • A former member wrote: the most warm and heart rending poems i've ever come across. beautiful doesn't do your work justice!

  • Lylani On Tuesday, December 2, 2008, Lylani (112)By person wrote:

    Heartbreakingly beautiful

  • BrokenAngel On Sunday, August 24, 2008, BrokenAngel (28)By person wrote:

    Thus, I will hold her up So she never finds out what she has lost -that is beautiful. a heartbreaking love

  • A former member wrote: Love it. Great write.

  • Reefer_rave On Monday, March 31, 2008, Reefer_rave (139)By person wrote:

    Going through my bookmarks on IE and can't believe i never left a comment..Fuck stability, I swear it causes just as many problems. I always love re-reading this.

  • A former member wrote: Like reefer_rave said, fuck stability. Stability only means that you really, really KNOW how shitty this world truly is. Why survive in such a gray place when you can LIVE, even if you have to paint colors that you didn't know weren't there?

  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i've gone back to this poem at least a half dozen times and it still gives me chills. every time. i still adore it.

  • A former member wrote: i especially like /why can't I taste the clouds anymore/

  • Taunting The Reaper On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Taunting The Reaper (169)By person wrote:

    What a touching tragicly beautiful and inspiring piece. I love it.

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    softly weeping beauty with a delicate heart catching ending... superb

  • xserratedsoulx On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    wow. i am speechless. that's really really good. i'm fav-ing it. i wish i could say something profound about it. but all i can think about is how i have goosebumps.

  • Tania On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Tania (192)By person wrote:

    suprised ive never read this before..beautiful and graceful..'i caught them eating her wings' something haunting about that line.wonderful.

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    oooh so sad and beautiful. you have broken my heart. ;) just love this one so much.

  • A former member wrote: Gods this is so dreamy and beautiful! It paints such a sad tragic picture. Well done.

  • A former member wrote: wow this is amazing..i love it...i want to fave this...this will be faved once i upgrade

  • A former member wrote: i love this.

  • doll on the rag On Sunday, January 28, 2007, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    admired. [+faved.]

  • zanewill On Saturday, January 27, 2007, zanewill (82)By person wrote:

    beautifully written... simple yet totally complete. awesome write

  • A former member wrote: I liked the last sentence. It brought a smile to my face. You really stressed your point across I respected that about this piece although its not a favorite . ][ ][

  • jack paper On Saturday, January 27, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    wow... tragic and beautiful

  • denver nitze On Saturday, January 27, 2007, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    beautiful.

  • soul dancer On Friday, January 26, 2007, soul dancer (95)By person wrote:

    Such a sad and touching piece. Very simple but powerful.

  • happilydepressed On Friday, January 26, 2007, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    sad, very sad but very good

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