She bends her arms to look like wings.
By Armor for your life
I caught them
Eating her Wings
Trying to make her more "stable."
And taking away
What she has been graced with.
When all her feathers are gone,
I wonder if she will still reach for the sky
With that same look in her eyes.
That look that defines hope.
“Why can’t I taste the clouds anymore?”
She sings.
Now starting to realize her dilemma.
I fear she will bend her arms to look like wings,
And break them in her attempt.
Thus,
I will hold her up
So she never finds out what she has lost.
So she can still feel the breeze
Break against her body.
Because I can't picture the sky
With out the soft outline
Of her silhouette.
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© 2007 Armor for your life
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I remember loving this piece previously, on an old account. I still love it.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile
(22) wrote:
Beautiful piece. I do hate when society tries to change people they deem different. Our differences make us beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
This piece... thank you for writing it... it is beautiful, moving and striking... it literally took my breath away. Amazing, amazing!
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This is simply gorgeous. Every line is perfection.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing work, as to all of your poems! You inspire me alot when I write my poetry
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem so much
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On Thursday, May 21, 2009, surething
(51) wrote:
this is a beautiful lament, truly beautiful in its capture of the feeling
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A former member wrote:
the most warm and heart rending poems i've ever come across. beautiful doesn't do your work justice!
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On Tuesday, December 2, 2008, Lylani
(112) wrote:
Heartbreakingly beautiful
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On Sunday, August 24, 2008, BrokenAngel
(28) wrote:
Thus, I will hold her up So she never finds out what she has lost -that is beautiful. a heartbreaking love
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A former member wrote:
Love it. Great write.
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Reefer_rave
(139) wrote:
Going through my bookmarks on IE and can't believe i never left a comment..Fuck stability, I swear it causes just as many problems. I always love re-reading this.
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A former member wrote:
Like reefer_rave said, fuck stability. Stability only means that you really, really KNOW how shitty this world truly is. Why survive in such a gray place when you can LIVE, even if you have to paint colors that you didn't know weren't there?
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On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
i've gone back to this poem at least a half dozen times and it still gives me chills. every time. i still adore it.
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A former member wrote:
i especially like /why can't I taste the clouds anymore/
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On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
What a touching tragicly beautiful and inspiring piece. I love it.
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On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
softly weeping beauty with a delicate heart catching ending... superb
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On Wednesday, November 21, 2007, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
wow. i am speechless. that's really really good. i'm fav-ing it. i wish i could say something profound about it. but all i can think about is how i have goosebumps.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
suprised ive never read this before..beautiful and graceful..'i caught them eating her wings' something haunting about that line.wonderful.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
oooh so sad and beautiful. you have broken my heart. ;) just love this one so much.
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A former member wrote:
Gods this is so dreamy and beautiful! It paints such a sad tragic picture. Well done.
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A former member wrote:
wow this is amazing..i love it...i want to fave this...this will be faved once i upgrade
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A former member wrote:
i love this.
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
admired. [+faved.]
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, zanewill
(82) wrote:
beautifully written... simple yet totally complete. awesome write
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A former member wrote:
I liked the last sentence. It brought a smile to my face. You really stressed your point across I respected that about this piece although its not a favorite . ][ ][
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
wow... tragic and beautiful
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
beautiful.
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, soul dancer
(95) wrote:
Such a sad and touching piece. Very simple but powerful.
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
sad, very sad but very good