Comments by surething
- "this is pure beauty..."when the clouds forget
that silver is the color
of promise"- so poeticly softt, this whole piece truly speaks to the heart. You paint 'getting lost' as a painfully beautiful journey that would be hard to resist going on. "
Posted by surething on "div.ision" by Six-Out
- "You painted a truly vivid picture in this one. It was hard not to put yourserlf in the piece, and by hte time I got to "And all I really want to do
is stand up with a clean heart and empty stomach,
wipe my mouth,find my way home,
and write something beautiful" I couldn't help but feel so empathetic and felt like I needed the cleansing too. This was truly engaging, exquisitely done."
Posted by surething on "A drunken rant about heartbreak,vomiting,and an answer to "A"." by estherbell
- "this was felt stripped of vanities, beautiful in its humility. this was wondrefully done with such a humbling tone"
Posted by surething on "Hospital bed" by estherbell
- "well thank you for the feedback! The title was orginally 'unfurnished pleas' and then I wanted to play around with the whole theme of imperfections, which is interwoven throughout the write. I was going to mispell unfurnished and pleas, however it just didn't feel right. So Unfunfurnished relating to imperfect, and Please (sounding like 'pleas')) referring to the acceptance and love within the imperfections. Hope that made sense :)"
Posted by surething on "Un furnished Please" by surething
- "very alluring writing here, the syntax here makes you want to read this over again. Your descriptions of the actions in this poem were well done, you have a novel-esque flair to this. I really enjoyed it"
Posted by surething on "What's Left" by Narcissa
- "youve taken such a pain and inner loss inside you and put such an elegant literary face to it, this is often difficult to do when dealing with such personal topics, however it was exquisite"
Posted by surething on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
- "its often refreshing to stuble upon poetry which excites the senses, which is exactly what this piece did, I really liked the sensory appeal to this!"
Posted by surething on "For You" by Muse
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