Comments by Syringe
- "That's very smart of you because this is actually a warning of the ugly side of New York': all that glitters truly is not gold."
Posted by Syringe on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "i can smell your anger. who says u need to have a clever rhyme or quip to call it a poem? pshh..i don't. you got your message out loud and clear. ty for sharing. the only thing.. i think you should've ended it with 'fuck you shadow'.that statement is powerful enough if u ask me."
Posted by Syringe on "Kill Shadow" by Dark Goth
- "thank you for the comment, but honestly this poem was not intended as a dedication to the band itself. I love the band..their skills kill...but I wanted to make a piece about twisted dolls and the band name suit the tone perfectly...everything just kind of fell into place"
Posted by Syringe on "Dresden Dolls" by Syringe
- "i see this as a tug of war. it's like ur head is the angel,but ur body is the devil. theyre both major compnents that make you who you are. and you're struggling within yourself which part to listen to. seems like ur head won this battle..."
Posted by Syringe on "and this should be easy" by freudian-slip
- "good rant. i tend to rant in rant too. you got your message out pretty well in such a small rant. it usually takes me a few lines before i completely get everything off my chest. lol. keep ranting!"
Posted by Syringe on "Short Rant of Insanity" by Organized_Chaos
- "great imagery. i l-o-v-e-d the way you described the skeleton tree. life is but a dream for the dead"
Posted by Syringe on "Cemetery Queen" by Kurashu
- "i like this piece. it's very raw and honest. it's hard to forgive others, especially parents, but it's feels so much better to release that pain and carry on with your life. "
Posted by Syringe on "breastfeeding me lies" by denver nitze
- "ooh lol. ofcourse it is. trapping yourself in a box to appease strangers, for their unneccessary satisfaction. God forbid, someone has the courage to be him/herself."
Posted by Syringe on "G-U-L-A-G" by Syringe
- "you made yourself known through your words, and not you body. this write reminds me of some of the girls on myspace with the 'mirror' pictures. with their lips pursed and belly hanging out. why is it necessary, honestly? this write captures that message to me perfectly."
Posted by Syringe on "T & A" by freudian-slip
- "a cop out to what? are you talking about the parasite bit? that's not being paranoid, it's a fact. especially where i work"
Posted by Syringe on "G-U-L-A-G" by Syringe
- "love this rant. i feel rants are the most honest and liberating writing style. your words are powerful and felt each one "
Posted by Syringe on "Damnation" by RequiemExMortis
- "i love the blue collar/white collar bit. you're right about how someone who can be so smart can be so stupidly taken away by lust. you phrase your words well "
Posted by Syringe on "Anatomy 101" by freudian-slip
- "You want to be her beloved and at the same time her despair. I can absolutely relate. Love/Lust is rather insane in the most honest way"
Posted by Syringe on "What I Want" by DarkHeart
- "i love the 4th satnza and last word 'epitaph'. it just goes to show how death comes in many ways. "
Posted by Syringe on "Half The Man" by DarkHeart
- "woow i love the first two lines. i think those 2 sentences have been said out of every human being. u where ur emotions on ur sleeve that's why i love ur work"
Posted by Syringe on "FORSAKEN" by SGT Bloth
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