album leaf. [rhapsody]
By Six-Out
punctured. perfection
picturesque in a sense. we're pierced
placed on a pedestal of prepackaged nonsense.
sold souls drifting in a summer breeze.
please me this once.
please.
empty empathy. and erased sympathy
silly, it seemed. lost in the inseams of these incessant dreams
weak in the knees for no apparent cause.
we're all flawed.
[fallen angels that never had wings]
believe me. I'm lost.
and the cost is more than the meaning.
.
breaking. there's the point in every structure.
every inch- and tapped vein. it'll eventually rupture.
.
she spoke to me in silent symphonies. when my hands were shaking
street corners. the lights. she'd dance with me.
and tell me it's never alright.
these nights get too long.
.
and I broke the shadow dancers. killed the silhouettes
cried out in fear to the stars.
because there's no heaven left.
no words to say a prayer. and no heart to try to ease.
no hope in fairytale endings. no.
there's no reason left to believe.
and I broke my fist into five seperate points.
each one marking a time. when time meant more than nothing.
please me this once. and please.
[make me want to believe]
Comments on "album leaf. [rhapsody]"
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On Monday, January 30, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Killed me in a most fortunate way. Just hypnotic man. You humble me.
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On Sunday, October 30, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Well, yes, if i had balls they would have definately been kicked. Ah little taco bean, you never fail. ~ wen
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On Saturday, October 29, 2005, Rachel
(210) wrote:
Jesus christ, Jon. You'll never lose the ability to bring me to tears.
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A former member wrote:
Last full stanza kicked me in my balls. Sometimes the things that would give momentary promise tell everlasting lies. Doesn't stop us from craving the immediate relief. Cool write.
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
this was brilliant. what more is there to say? -Glass
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A former member wrote:
oh wow...this is beautiful. I won't deny that you made my exhaustion-leaded eyes shine with every glittering word...you have braced my smile with galaxies and I would have it no other way. Lovely. *Evangel*
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, nell
(270) wrote:
thet second to last bit, eloquently said...i must say your best always comes from the worst six,now it's up ot you to say whether that is a blessing or a curse
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
Unlike Jerrica, I can pick my fav: "no hope in fairytale endings. no. /there's no reason left to believe."-wow. ~T~
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
nifty
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
Pardon the cliche statement, but this left me breathless....by chance are you a diamond? ;) Wonderful write mister.