The Substitute Teacher Named Mr. King!

By Mr King

(An original manuscript for a fully illustrated children's book.)

Today, Mr. King was our substitute teacher.

He was really tall.
He had green eyes.
He played happy music for us.
He was funny.
He was very loud.
He impersonated the voices of Mickey Mouse, Goofy, Yogi Bear, Apu from the Simpsons, and he even laughed like Scooby Doo!
He came to our school because our teacher wasn't feeling good.

He gave us the POWER!

Today, he taught us about ten important words...
He taught us about FREEDOM and how to get more of it.
He taught us about JUSTICE and about fairness.
He taught us about TRUTH and about the consequences of lying.
He taught us that we could CREATE and make things real.
He taught us how to TEACH and that we already do.
He taught us about LOVE and that it is better than hate.
He taught us about UNITY and that we as people are all from one big family.
He taught us about PEACE and that we can make it.
He taught us to use our INTELLIGENCE and to think the choices we make.
He taught us about COOPERATION and how to work together.

We used the dictionary to look up the definition of each word.
We talked until we knew what the words meant and many different ways in which they were related.

He showed us these ten words on his fingers.
He showed us these ten words on our fingers.

He showed us that the POWER was now in our hands!

Mr. King asked us what we wanted to be when we grew up.
He then drew a mountain on the chalkboard with people climbing it.

"A scientist," said Jula.
"A social worker," said Trish.
"A singer," said Shannon.
"A baseball player," said Chris.
"A doctor," said Dana.
"An artist," said Matt.
"A conscious rapper," said Derrick.
"A teacher," said Rory.
"An astronaut," said Dedra.
"A firefighter," said Ana Maria.

Mr. King said that the people climbing up the mountain represented us.

He said that the top of the mountain represented what we wanted to be when we grew up. "That is your goal," he said!

He taught us that knowing the ten words and having the POWER would help us to make it to the top of the mountain and achieve our goals.

Mr. King said that if we understood and used these ten words that we would become powerful people!

He said that if we used our INTELLIGENCE we would gain more FREEDOM.

He said that if we told the TRUTH and worked to CREATE more JUSTICE and fairness that we would create more PEACE and LOVE in the world.

He told us that we were all relatives, and he explained that when we understood UNITY we would realize that we were all members of the one human race and all actually from one giant family.

He said, however, that if we did not have JUSTICE then we would not have PEACE.

He also told us that if we did not use our INTELLIGENCE, nor tell the TRUTH, nor play fair, nor learn how to make PEACE that we would lose our FREEDOM, lose our POWER, and lose the ability to live happily and achieve our goals.

We may find ourselves locked up, perhaps even literally. He showed us this by folding his fingers into fists, turning them over, and crossing them behind his back at the wrists.

We listened to Mr. King because we didn't want to go to jail!

Then we each got to draw pictures about our favorite word that he taught us.

Later, Mr. King slam-dunked the basketball at recess!

Mr. King, he was cool.

He gave us the POWER.

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Copyright 2003 Seth David King
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Short Story"
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  • darkness falls On Wednesday, May 2, 2012, darkness falls (73)By person wrote:

    Absolutely awesome!!! The world needs a lot more Mr. Kings...I will share this with everyone I know.

  • Mr King On Monday, June 6, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    My book is complete. Stay tuned for where and how to get it. 1, Seth

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    ive read this a few times and i was sure i had left a comment but i guess i was so awe struck i forgot...this is an amazing piece of work, you are truly gifted ~kristy

  • Zhee On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    you deserve a standing ovation *bravo!* :)

  • Liz On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    When you say 90% real, you're talking about the slam-dunk, aren't you? Teasing aside, though, I'd be interested in where to purchase the finished product.

  • Mr King On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Slam? Who knows... but my book will be available soon through... www.ascension-education.com

  • A former member wrote: I wish I had a coolass hippie teacher when I was growing up. I had more than 30 teachers from kindigarden through highschool and I think that I had maybe one that actually gave a shit about his students.1/30 is not a good ratio YOU ROCK

  • A former member wrote: and I'm not trying to suck up this is just a subject very near to my heart. Why the hell do people get into teaching if they don't like or don't know who to deal with children

  • A former member wrote: should be "how" to deal with children

  • Mr King On Monday, February 16, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Yes, Dancing Monkey... This story is a true one... I substitute teach elementary school and teach this lesson to all my 3rd to 5th graders... The published fully illustrated children's book is coming soon.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Interesting...

  • Mr King On Saturday, May 15, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Its not exactly 100% true... but 90% true and based upon reality.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    kinda noble, but I see a taint. I wassent popular in school cous I allways wanted to live in my dream world. this leaves me out the whole picture cous I could never be cool and slam dunk or be popular. popularity is a flaw. I'm not sure about this.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    but you do say they get to draw pictures of there dreams. hmm, maybe it's cous I'm from Denmark. but this seems all American dream like. and the part of going to jail is realy scary.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    The teen commandments part rminded me of the bible and to be a good cristian and that leaves us with a new question as to him being god. But we all need guideliness I guess and he was only a substitute teacher.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    But that name Mr.King.. I surely do see a taint. :o) Monkey

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, February 13, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    hey wait a sec.. It's your last name.. :O) delete the last taint I see.. M

  • A former member wrote: Ahh this is the cutest, I love it. You must be a very special person.. *shyly* my second name is King.. Feel the Force! ~Wish

  • sole On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, sole (93)By person wrote:

    Inspiring and what you do for the youth is admirable. Another wonderful write.

  • Ideas On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Ideas (50)By person wrote:

    Wow, this is really good, very thought provoking. I'll be checking out your Youth Empowerment Peace Project later today.

  • yslehc On Saturday, November 29, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    oooo good message and well written for children, i like it

  • A former member wrote: wonderful. just plain wonderful.

  • Mr King On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the support... To view the evolution of this concept and the Youth Empowerment Peace Project (YEPP), please visit http://la.indymedia.org/news/2003/08/77128.php

  • Nomad On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Nomad (38)By person wrote:

    nice positive message (a rarity). "We listened to Mr. King because we didn’t want to go to jail!" is sort of a creepy line though.

  • Mr King On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    this is taken from what the kid said from his perspective... a childlike conclusion... yet scary yes that a child could get that... but in central LA it comes up

  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    ::grins:: this is fabulous. i really like this. kids need this kind of teaching. one inspired person, plus one, plus one, plus one... forms an army against apathy. :)

  • Delilah On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    Wow...loved this...you don't see much like this on this site...truly loved it...~Delilah~

  • A former member wrote: Amazing...simply amazing. I applaud you.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    very inspiring indeed...-l-

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    truly impressed my friend, you speak of good things, and inspire our youth, this step alone is noble and far- reaching.............well done SETH.....im glad to see you on the site, i think you have alot to offer here at dp, welcome.......urban===charley

  • Mr King On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Thank you Charley... Trish and I love you bro... don't be a stranger :>)... 1

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    astounding...to say the least.

  • Drifter On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    Imagine the world we could live in if we were taught these things as children. Great write once again.

  • Mr King On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Actually my friend, I do this for a living. I teach elementary school and am currently starting a program entitled the Youth Empowerment Peace Project (YEPP) to teach this to all 8-13 year old children in the U.S. If interested more, please contact me.


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