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The Altar
By elisa
Reaching back through my soul
I tear my weaken beaten heart
from my sunken chest
tonight I take my love back in my own
hands
I alone have come to make the final break
my
heart will ever suffer
once you stood a marathon away
gracing my horizon
but time has passed from centuries
to eons
and
sorrow travels slowly through forever
in
eternity
I stand here
atop
The Great Pyramid
before the
Devil's hell
and
God's holy heaven
I take my broken heart
and
clean the slate of history
shattering the memory of me
leaving nothing more than
poetry
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Copyright 2005 elisa
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On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
Your a beast of written lyric, sick with venom, the trick is to move quick when you hear it, rhythm of her spirit
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A former member wrote:
gorgeous.... don't let the ugly consume your beauty, babe.... never hide your talent, please :) stay strong, shweets and thank you.
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
The space in s poem is grand and the feeling it portrays is powerful.. Godly and majestic.. The way with your bare your bare hands you penetrate to your heart was intense and admired..
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A former member wrote:
to be your immortality..... my life for these words..... *bows before the altar of elisa* I am your sacrifice....
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely beautiful! I particularly like the phrase "a marathon away." I'm very impressed. (9)
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
so beautiful...lovely...touching and wonderous...you are amazing*
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Nothing more than...beauty...
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On Saturday, February 26, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
Perfect... absolutely beautiful. Love, Seth
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
such engrossing beauty and pain in these words...'sorrow travels slowly through forever in eternity'..amazing line that...achingly shattering with such grace...great work
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A former member wrote:
wow this is great great work fucking a right ~~GOTHIC~~
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this felt epic in its vision, certain words used here really added so much to it,causing a mealstrom of different emotions
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