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yeah, i got your note
By FadedBlues
yeah, i got your note, thanks
who
am i talking to...you're gone...long gone...
but, hell, i don't blame
you for wanting to run away
from this crummy apartment on the corner
of
Ramshackle st. & SucksBigTime blvd. .....
-~-~-~-~-
if i took all the good pieces of my past,
stitched them together,
i wouldn't have a rag big
enough to blow my nose with -~-~-~-~-
couple drinks'll put me to sleep tonight...
hey, that heart
you took with you, just
drop it in the nearest garbage can...
yeah, i got your note,
i nailed it to the cracking wall
so i could blow my brains out with it
every day
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Copyright 2012 FadedBlues
Published on Monday, January 16, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
...can't escape the Heartbreak fairy...Comments on "yeah, i got your note"
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A former member wrote:
wow this made my heart feel like there was a vice grip on it, the last few lines really got me, very well done.
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, blue angel
(866)
wrote:
I think I need a couple of drinks after that, heat clincher... :)~
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A former member wrote:
A unique take on a loss, the portrayal of knowing the best part kf you is gone, but yet not loathing the one who departed your side, it's intersting! Heart break comes, sadness is brought, suicide is the release! Great write!
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A former member wrote:
Wow. The seeming careless acknowledgment, accepting the heartache, and the ending was just so raw.
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On Tuesday, May 15, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Raw and real - love this. Thanks for sharing your pain and putting them in words.
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A former member wrote:
Yea wish i was left a note once im still trying to figure it out good ink
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
No one can escape heart ache or heartbreak, but few more can write a poem about it as nicely as you did. The "stitched rag" image was just absolutely amazing. Thank you for posting this wonderful piece.
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On Monday, January 16, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...you know, with true friends, one 'Thank You' isn't enough...when the night sky puts on stars (something I borrowed from Cummings) those words are carved into every one...
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On Monday, January 16, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
I'm bookmarking this so I can refer all the wet and moisties to the proper way to express heartbreak and loss, thanks!
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On Monday, January 16, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Hell yeah!!! I love it!!
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A former member wrote:
So elemental in its simplicity... almost zen. Pure and stark in its pain and honest. Great metaphor in the rag image!
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A former member wrote:
this is fucking fantastic
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