Bitter Sweet

By ReddropX

I want you
Long winter nights
Secret rendezvous in the dark
Under pale beams of dead moonlight
Stars stare down to witness our sin
You and I submersed in darkness
Every long deep kiss brings a new twist
Every sensuous touch tears our lives further apart
Each thrust murders our friendship that much more
Lust holds its knife held high above
Await the first strike from my dark love

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© 2008 ReddropX
Published on Tuesday, July 22, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I agree with Elisa. and this was very well done!! ~ hdb.

  • DIATRICUS On Wednesday, July 23, 2008, DIATRICUS (64)By person wrote:

    wonderful depiction of a quaint tryst -- short and sweet, yet everlasting... nicely done.

  • elisa On Tuesday, July 22, 2008, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    completely irresistible... love the look ..the tone and the feel. nicely done.

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