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Bitter Sweet
By ReddropX
I want you
Long winter nights
Secret rendezvous in the dark
Under pale beams of dead moonlight
Stars stare down to witness our sin
You and I submersed in darkness
Every long deep kiss brings a new twist
Every sensuous touch tears our lives further apart
Each thrust murders our friendship that much more
Lust holds its knife held high above
Await the first strike from my dark love
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© 2008 ReddropX
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A former member wrote:
I agree with Elisa. and this was
very well done!! ~ hdb.
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2008, DIATRICUS
(64)
wrote:
wonderful depiction of a quaint tryst -- short and sweet, yet everlasting... nicely done.
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
completely irresistible... love the look ..the tone and the feel. nicely done.
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