A Flower
By Crush_With_Eyeliner
I envy
your clothes.
The way
you fold
them
in blonde.
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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Thursday, October 14, 2010.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "A Flower"
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On Wednesday, October 20, 2010, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
"in blonde"...Those 2 words...Bright and explosive.
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On Wednesday, October 20, 2010, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Rereading this...This is pure love :)
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On Friday, October 15, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
short but sweet... envious of her... nicely done
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A former member wrote:
hmmm I saw a blond woman folding her clothes lovingly...nude, of course.... I like the way the flower folds the clothes, perhaps.... and the color... the brightness of the blond...... leaves one as if shining upon the flower... when one opens by folding... the paradox of love.... what is there not to envy... to be at the hands of such an one. very nicely crafted *bows*
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, ebonyamore
(101) wrote:
I got a fully different view on this than what seems to be the general consensus...makes me wonder if I totally misread it. But to me it was laced with sarcasm...one of those snarky "shhhhh...you're so pretty" things..lol. like, "I envy how you're so simple that even your clothes seem blonde". but I think I might like the alternate interpretation even better.
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A former member wrote:
im not sure i get it either, for some reason im thinking birthday suit...ummm is that right? if that is it, what a striking visual.
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner
(48) wrote:
I could tell you what it literally was about, if you'd like. I'd prefer to leave that all up to you. Birthday suit, huh? That's....interesting....
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A former member wrote:
okay, i guess i got it wrong, pictured a beautiful girl in her birthday suit ( i envy your clothes) with blonde hair...dont explain what it really is, i wasnt smart enough to get it the first time
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner
(48) wrote:
that's the beauty of poetry. It's not about "smart" or "not-so-smart"...it's completely subjective. And I like to be at least partially ambiguous as far as meaning goes. These words are about a feeling I had, fleetingly, today. The words convey that feeling, as best as I can describe it. It's fantastic that you can perceive of it in a different way. Like the way instrumental music effects a person. I appreciate your input, and value above all the fact that it made you think or feel something. Don't sell yourself short..
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On Thursday, October 14, 2010, elisa
(1616) wrote:
you have an amazing way of observing a moment. i like your mental construct.