Comments by ebonyamore
- "This is very vivid and very sobering. I like nothing about the imagery or what it represents but the way you write it pulls no punches and leaves its mark on my solar plexus. I'm sorry for the loss of your father."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Mogadishu, Somalia" by Roxxi
- "The image is immaculate and the poem was equally so. I got stuck on the line "pursed lips filled with emptiness of the meek/rendered with desiccated watercolor dreams/scenes of something once so sodden with hope/now dry and barren". Such beautifully bereft imagery. I also liked the juxtaposition of the poem itself describing death as cold and a thing of the cosmos against the author's note which is almost triumphant. Really intriguing piece."
Posted by ebonyamore on "...Trench Coat Sorrows" by SolApathy
- "Gorgeous piece. I like the sense of hope through the hopeless, like the tiny shards of light that break through storm clouds. Nicely written!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "After the rains" by RedWolf
- "Taking the chances I don't want to regret missing...ps...check your mail, stranger.
-Ebony Amore has shut the door and doesn't know where to find it...but through the hole her glances stole...trying to find the rabbit. Jack was nimble but never quick at dancing around the fire, thunder, rain, love, hate, sex, pain and the word has up his Ire.... just an echo long remembered and hoped to be heard again. Long live the Word."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Untitled" by witch
- "the melody of regret, shadows of missed opportunity, of something that didn't quite catch but can't let go, either. Beautiful and haunting. It speaks. to me."
Posted by ebonyamore on "unplayed piano" by boneplate
- "this is my favorite of your pieces. its raw and emotional and real. a still life of a stilled life. beautiful in its tragedy."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "I don't always like rhymed and metered poetry, mainly because its so hard to make it truly beautiful. This was a great piece. The title was perfect and the images were crisp and vivid but in a hauntingly dreamlike melody. Beautiful write! I need to read the rest of your works!"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Missing Saints" by Iwas
- "Ok, so I may get kicked out of the metalhead cabal for this buuuuut....gotta tell you, this called Michael Jackson and Thriller to mind just as easily...which I also loved but do give me a little wiggle room on this one. I was only like 7 at the time. Either way, great piece. Loved reading it."
Posted by ebonyamore on "Fear Of The Dark" by HeadpatSlut
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