The Magician
By Stranger
A top hat and cape
A bouquet of plastic flowers
A slight of hand, a wand's wave
Our love is magic
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I walk onto the stage
Tip my hat and bow
You applaud; you are the audience
You are all I need
I open my mouth, an egg appears; it grows
Too large to escape; my teeth are prison bars
You applaud
I remove my hat and bow
From the egg, a raven hatches
Soft, black feathers muffle your name, all names
A claw-like beak pulls at my tongue
But a magician never reveals his secrets, ever
The raven becomes a dove, and dies
This should make me very ill
It does not
You rise to your feet and applaud
Now I ask for a volunteer
You tell me that you are flattered
But you do not believe in magic
I hand you my hat, and I applaud
The curtain falls between us
Lights dim and we wonder¦
(Even if there is no magic
There will always be wonder)
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A coffin with a hidden door
A card dealt from the bottom
A puff of smoke, a flash of light
Our love is magic
Comments on "The Magician"
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On Monday, December 15, 2014, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
She doesn't believe in magic, but you do magic, and both of you make magic. My brain hurts. Deliciously.
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On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Manperson96
(23) wrote:
Beautifully written.
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A former member wrote:
wow. you grab the readers attention and hold them there while you paint a picture around them in vivid color. enchanting.
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On Thursday, December 13, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
I enjoy the dance between illusion and emotion, the unveiling of human intrigue. Is the magic the trickery?... or our inner fascination?...even be it dark.
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On Thursday, December 13, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
brilliant..... a rare backstage view from the voice in the spotlight. profound insight.
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On Wednesday, June 14, 2006, kiss of the dark
(32) wrote:
very magickal! I see your story with vivid technicolor and I feel the confucious love that bids this poem beauty.
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On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
dude this kicks ass ...INTELLIGENT and BEAUTIFULLY written. AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT
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On Friday, July 9, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
well done my friend,your parallels are genuine, and understood......spoken so well............urban
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
magic is a mystery and we still need mystery in life, i love the way the raven truns to a dove great write
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On Sunday, May 9, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Very poetical and enchanting . .every line just made me wonder what the next one would be like .. again I applaud to the magician of words.
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
This is quite an amazing show you put on for us. I especially like the images of the egg, raven and dove. *tugs on your coat tails* encore! encore! :::OLd
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Wowza, this just was truly an amzing read, vibrated right through the mind. ~ wen
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
::gasp:: Wow...you wrote...and wow...its magic...
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, MyBrokenMynd
(167) wrote:
wow, i so know magickal love.. wow, this was incredible.. the last stanza ended it perfectly.. i loved this.. *tears*