The Magician

By Stranger

A top hat and cape
A bouquet of plastic flowers
A slight of hand, a wand's wave
Our love is magic

---

I walk onto the stage
Tip my hat and bow
You applaud; you are the audience
You are all I need

I open my mouth, an egg appears; it grows
Too large to escape; my teeth are prison bars
You applaud
I remove my hat and bow

From the egg, a raven hatches
Soft, black feathers muffle your name, all names
A claw-like beak pulls at my tongue
But a magician never reveals his secrets, ever

The raven becomes a dove, and dies
This should make me very ill
It does not
You rise to your feet and applaud

Now I ask for a volunteer
You tell me that you are flattered
But you do not believe in magic
I hand you my hat, and I applaud

The curtain falls between us
Lights dim and we wonder¦
(Even if there is no magic
There will always be wonder)

---

A coffin with a hidden door
A card dealt from the bottom
A puff of smoke, a flash of light
Our love is magic

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Copyright 2004 Stranger
Published on Tuesday, April 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Monday, December 15, 2014, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    She doesn't believe in magic, but you do magic, and both of you make magic. My brain hurts. Deliciously.

  • Manperson96 On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Manperson96 (23)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written.

  • A former member wrote: wow. you grab the readers attention and hold them there while you paint a picture around them in vivid color. enchanting.

  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, December 13, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    I enjoy the dance between illusion and emotion, the unveiling of human intrigue. Is the magic the trickery?... or our inner fascination?...even be it dark.

  • elisa On Thursday, December 13, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    brilliant..... a rare backstage view from the voice in the spotlight. profound insight.

  • kiss of the dark On Wednesday, June 14, 2006, kiss of the dark (32)By person wrote:

    very magickal! I see your story with vivid technicolor and I feel the confucious love that bids this poem beauty.

  • AniDayz On Saturday, December 25, 2004, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    dude this kicks ass ...INTELLIGENT and BEAUTIFULLY written. AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT

  • urbanhumility On Friday, July 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    well done my friend,your parallels are genuine, and understood......spoken so well............urban

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, May 24, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    magic is a mystery and we still need mystery in life, i love the way the raven truns to a dove great write

  • maddin foxxxy On Sunday, May 9, 2004, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    Very poetical and enchanting . .every line just made me wonder what the next one would be like .. again I applaud to the magician of words.

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, April 29, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    This is quite an amazing show you put on for us. I especially like the images of the egg, raven and dove. *tugs on your coat tails* encore! encore! :::OLd

  • manywalks On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Wowza, this just was truly an amzing read, vibrated right through the mind. ~ wen

  • Mistress Morbid On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    ::gasp:: Wow...you wrote...and wow...its magic...

  • MyBrokenMynd On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, MyBrokenMynd (167)By person wrote:

    wow, i so know magickal love.. wow, this was incredible.. the last stanza ended it perfectly.. i loved this.. *tears*

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