These are all very rough, and have yet to be edited. Please give constuctive criticism, tell me how you interpreted it, and if the feedback is positive, specifics about what parts you liked are always nice. Thanks for you help. {I figured I should add this: I am awful at interpreting the meaning of other people's poetry. I try to read everyone who comments on mine, but I usually won't comment back unless I have something worth saying. If I don't comment back, it is usually due to a lack of helpful input to give to you.}

Gabriel's Works

Poetry	2004-10-15	wayward pine
Poetry	2004-10-15	the candle
Poetry	2004-10-15	Red woods
Poetry	2004-10-15	i lie down
Poetry	2004-10-15	the walking of a broken man
Poetry	2004-10-25	"do you find it"
Poetry	2004-10-25	"it seems"
Poetry	2004-10-25	"the dreams float down to me"
Poetry	2004-10-25	"In a city of plagued persons"
Poetry	2004-10-25	"that gleam of a pristine new toy"
Poetry	2004-10-25	"The leaves on the oak trees"
Poetry	2004-10-25	let us suppose
Poetry	2004-11-03	"each old mem'ry"
Poetry	2004-11-03	"i pass a thousand faces a day"
Poetry	2004-11-03	curtains, bright red with swinging golden tassels
Poetry	2004-11-03	brand new
Poetry	2004-12-26	Just Belle for Short
Poetry	2005-02-23	syllables
Poetry	2005-02-23	Only Businessmen and Writers
Poetry	2005-02-25	"i sit on my lunchbreak"
Poetry (Structured)	2005-10-17	{ iNFatuAtion!},
Poetry	2006-01-13	the effects of seeing her
Poetry	2006-01-13	catching snow flakes on a winters night
Poetry	2006-01-13	tell me of what i speak
Poetry	2006-01-13	how does our young plaintiff plea?
Poetry (Tribute)	2006-05-17	Ode to Neurosis

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