"it seems"

By Gabriel

it seems
that just
four-hundred
cigarettes
ago
you were
here in
my arms
but now
i just
hug the
smoke of
my four
-hundredth
and one

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Copyright 2004 Gabriel
Published on Monday, October 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I wonder if you still exist......if you do this was awesome dude. artsy fartsy. well done minimalism.

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