"do you find it"

By Gabriel

do you find it
repulsive
that i am left
with an old shirt
and loose stool?
do i need an
alibi
to prove myself
unworthy of the
shame i've felt?

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Copyright 2004 Gabriel
Published on Monday, October 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Zhee On Monday, October 25, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was incredible... you conveyed so much cloaked in simplicity...

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