the effects of seeing her

By Gabriel

i saw her
on a normal day
or a normal night
i saw her (see?)
have you seen her?
tell me
is her beauty like the winter
or the springtime
i cannot tell anymore
when i saw her
i saw only myself
spirit, ideas, and feelings
a projection
of all things
that's all
i saw her
tarnished
(could i maker her brand new?)

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© 2006 Gabriel
Published on Friday, January 13, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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