"i pass a thousand faces a day"

i pass a thousand faces a day
wondering if a god hears them pray
while they pick out dinner for their
family that waits at home

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Published on Wednesday, November 3, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on ""i pass a thousand faces a day""

On Sunday, July 28, 2019, Dilated View (583) wrote:

It's interesting because I think I would fall into both groups here; both observer who is wondering and the person who is pondering. I agree with harlequinn, you packed a lot of possibility into just four lines like some kind of poem grenade that, if it would explode, would send us all into existential crisis. Very cool :)
On Monday, April 1, 2013, harlequinn (9) wrote:

I loved the simplicity of the poem. Just four lines of literature cause you to question even the existence of god. This is a truly powerful poem packed into four lines; simplicity at its finest.