Comments by harlequinn
- "This is a prime example of the power of emotion. A few syllables per line still brought me this feeling of melancholy and despair. Great work."
Posted by harlequinn on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "I loved the simplicity of the poem. Just four lines of literature cause you to question even the existence of god. This is a truly powerful poem packed into four lines; simplicity at its finest."
Posted by harlequinn on ""i pass a thousand faces a day"" by Gabriel
- "This poem is very well written, comparing life to glass as it can be easily made and easily broken. My only two complaints are that it felt quite short and that you used "u" instead of "you." Other than that, I applaud this work."
Posted by harlequinn on "shattered" by draco5445
- "Great work. I love how you used the spaces between the lines to make it seem as if they are feverish thoughts."
Posted by harlequinn on "ill. " by Corinthian
- "I can't help but feel that this was inspired by BioShock: Infinite... Even though it came out a decade later! I lived this poem, it gave me the feeling that society is a snake who aims its fangs at your ankles... A nice feeling."
Posted by harlequinn on "not coming out" by silent_screams
- "I love this poem; it reminds me of my first relationship (metaphorically). I noticed, however, that you forgot the I in the sentence where you put the knife to her throat. Otherwise, there's nothing that could make this better."
Posted by harlequinn on "Valentine's Day" by KuroiBara
- "This was a fantastic poem, showing your friend what you feel towards them. I have almost no criticisms, except for a question: was the first paragraph supposed to rhyme? If so, it would have been better to keep running; but the poem was amazing anyway."
Posted by harlequinn on "True Friend" by l mo
- "Wow. This poem is deep and meaningful, and I respect you for expressing yourself in such a heartfelt manner. My one issue is that I feel like you could have done an even better job by not rhyming; as this restricts the flow of the poem in some cases. Other than that, this was quite close to perfection."
Posted by harlequinn on "My Love is Wrong...?" by Aernor
