True Friend
By l mo
I wake up every morning
Wishing the day would end
Every day at school's a trial
Even with support of friends.
You help me get through the day
Without you I would fall
I've known you since we were young and innocent
Now look at the blood on our hands
You've helped me get through rough times
Just like I have for you
We've had our hard times and our good
But we've always made it out alright.
At night, when the sky gets dark
And I'm in danger and I break down
You're always standing there right next to me
To offer a shoulder I can cry on.
I love you like a sister
Even more than that, I'm sure
You're my best friend and always will be
Until we're lying in our death beds.
I know you've lost some people
That were very dear to you
But you still went on, day by day
And you hold your head up tall.
I don't know what I'd do without you
You help me no matter what
Just think of what we've gone through
In detention and Saturday school.
Tracy, Your the best
And I hope you know that, too
Your my flesh and blood
And truest friend.
And I'll love you
Through and through.
Comments on "True Friend"
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On Sunday, March 31, 2013, harlequinn
(9) wrote:
This was a fantastic poem, showing your friend what you feel towards them. I have almost no criticisms, except for a question: was the first paragraph supposed to rhyme? If so, it would have been better to keep running; but the poem was amazing anyway.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Swift
(35) wrote:
I loved this! Lovely write. Perfect display of true friendship at its greatest. Tracy is very lucky to have someone like you
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A former member wrote:
YEAH I FEEL SO LOVED LISA U ROK....
-tracy
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On Sunday, September 4, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
i know! ^^
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On Sunday, August 28, 2005, Doc
(143) wrote:
Very nice, Tracy should feel quite special
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On Monday, August 29, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
oh, she does. in some certain ways...she's VERY special....
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A former member wrote:
i liked this...i like poems like this
great pure emotions are in this and i like that