Comments by Swift
- "I loved the comparison here. Clever. The build up to the ending was great, it kept me on the edge. I gotta say, I was holding in a sneeze as I read it :p ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "A Sneeze" by stargaze0991
- "That was so sweet. The ending was beautiful; fantasy really is a great thing to make reality. Usually I don't like repeated words, but you pulled it off nicely. I was smiling as I got to the end of it. Hopefully this gets the reviews it deserves. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Here" by Err0r
- "That last line was amazing, it was a perfect way to end. Bitches cash and connections, nice one =]. This piece is very heartfelt. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Cidade de Deus" by Err0r
- "I loved this, honestly. This is what my friend seemed like he felt when he tried to get to know me way back when.. Favorite. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "go" by thefairytaleheart
- "This held me captive right until the last line... Gorgeous imagery. Stunning emotion. Every word portrayed a slow film in my mind.. Amazing. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on ".Self-Apart .Chalk Lines." by K_Love
- "This really made my heart go into shock or pain... such a lovely poem. Such true lines of emotion and love. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "One More Night" by freaky
- "Such powerful words! Very nice write. So true, as well that you could be led in another direction then be jerked back to the truth. ~Amber"
Posted by Swift on "Another Crush" by Cinn
- "Oh my, this is breathtaking! Such pretty colors in many shades.. wow. You lucky person to have seen this "
Posted by Swift on "Mai Thai" by TropicalSnowstorm
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