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shattered
By draco5445
ones life is such a fragile thing
It can be shattered as easy as
glass
the ones you love try to hold u together
to strengthen
you so you don't shatter easily
No matter how much you try
your
life is still easy to shatter
life is easy to create but just as easy
to destroy
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Copyright 2011 draco5445
Published on Thursday, January 13, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
this is not finsihed yet but i wanted to get down waht i hadComments on "shattered"
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On Monday, April 1, 2013, harlequinn
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wrote:
This poem is very well written, comparing life to glass as it can be easily made and easily broken. My only two complaints are that it felt quite short and that you used "u" instead of "you." Other than that, I applaud this work.
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