Only Businessmen and Writers

By Gabriel

it seems to me only
businessmen and writers
continue sitting after
paying the bill.
they leave their card out on
the bar and smoke a few
cigarettes.
having been both these men,
i know they stay for two
very different reasons.
businessmen sit to still
their thoughts and to escape
the stress only other
businessmen will know.
controlling people is rough.
and the writer sits to
observe these men and play
at the harder task of
stealing these men's spirits
with his ink and paper.
i have to say that the
later is much more fun,
playing like i'm gabriel,
judging all the barfolk.

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Copyright 2005 Gabriel
Published on Wednesday, February 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Monday, October 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    ...i would argue that writers don't do this at all, because they're generally impoverished and tend to sprint to the door before the bill has arrived :)

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    The reality of the poem is amazing. Amazing wording and amazing facts... Good points. You are very observative, and I enjoy that in a writer ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: nice...agreed~

  • Forgotten Angel On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    good write, lovely observation skills -Kel

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Cool write.. *Remembers the name Gabriel*

  • elisa On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    abysmal precept............wisdom that could only come from late-nite talks with 'God'.....or his top advisor;)elisa

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