A moment of silence
By wandering druid
Where is the moment of silence
In this hurried world
To pray and cry from the loss
Of an unborn child
Who'll never live her dreams
Who'll never laugh and run wild
Where is the moment of silence
In this wretched place
To remember the small spark
That graced
This existence
If only
For a limited time
A moment of silence
In a world of violence
heartache and pain
Is almost unheard of
Especially when no one had time
To get to know her
But she touched the souls
Of those who hoped she would live
With the most precious gift
She had to give
An appreciation for life
And a realization of
How short
It really is
Take a moment of silence
To reflect
On her short life
And how we often neglect
To revel in our own
And remember to give life
A little respect
And could someone write something
Better than this
To honor the memory
Of one who'll be missed
'Cause my words aren't strong enough
To truly honor her
Awards
Comments on "A moment of silence"
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A former member wrote:
I just read this. It happened. To my mother. She was going to have a baby boy, instead he died. Miscarriage? Maybe... Now I have a little sister. I wonder everyday what would my little brother be doing right now..
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A former member wrote:
i know who this was inteded for...but a few years ago, my mom lost her baby, my sister...and,wow, this made me think of her...this really hit home. i'm in tears
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
you did an amazing job..no doubt about it..beautifully written with loving expression
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On Monday, June 20, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is really a wonderful work. It speaks so much truth. You did a great job on this. I think everyone should read it. ~Sara
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
i'm at a loss for words...
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On Friday, June 17, 2005, Mr King
(547) wrote:
thank you so much for this my friend... Always, Seth
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A former member wrote:
*bows her head in respect*
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A former member wrote:
Very mournful.Sort of a slap in the face,How could they take so much without a moment of silence for the thigns noone seem to stop and care about for one moment.I completely understand.