Comments by ShardsofSilence

"This wasn't what I was expecting.. but in a good way. You brought up many good truths about organized religion that I agree with. But there were just a few other ideas that I believe deserve a little more defining and exploring.. It's actually a little more interesting after having done some digging. If you're open and up to it, I'd be glad to explain. Aside from that, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Sermon (a rhyming rant at Catholics and Christians)" by shadowsinthelight

"i seriously enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this beautiful piece. similar sentiments that i have been having for awhile. you expressed it well and poetically."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Once Upon A Time" by Kurashu

"*wraps one up as a Christmas present for you.. ;P"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "I TOLD you they were real!" by veingo

"I read it. Then re-read it. Then read it again. It still hasn't lost its effect. Very well done, I greatly enjoyed reading it."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical

""but I'll still be around when autumn comes..." Good start, good end, good middle, good title. I like it all. Well done."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "orion and the stars of winter" by swing_the_hammer

"It's raw. And it's brilliant."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on ""4:00am"" by Grim_Sorrow

"BAM! Now THAT'S kick ass poetry. I love the form of the piece as well! Like a ship sailing towards you.. You are brilliant!"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Uncharted" by Temerity

"exactly what I was going to say hahaha "
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Sage Francis and I" by Six-Out

"oh wow, how can you not laugh hahahha"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Do Not Laugh Amanda!" by Aunty Depressant

"I keep coming back to this, but I'm not sure why. There's just something in this that I relate to so well.."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "roses are red [and I'm more blue than the violet]" by Six-Out

"Gripping. Great imagery through the eyes of a boy, great use of words. Certainly a powerful write. Well done."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Mercy Killing" by Imsosickxxx

"Ooh la la. What a brilliant write. "Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats" is my favorite line. Amazing stuff. You get a brownie :D"
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "I Made Love With Clothes On" by Mylissa

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