The White Horse
By VenomPlease
It was a pale horse,
The palest of white
And his name who sat upon him was Death.
And I could swear I shook the hand of the Devil,
Selling away my soul, intertwined with fear.
Then looking back on myself, small and infantile,
Recalling the simplicity,
And the tiniest of desires.
How could such beauty turn awry?
A magnificent diamond turned to an ebony soul.
Then I see the white horse, befitting hell.
Dominance over the earth and so many
As if to kill with a sword.
Spewing famine and death over the world.
Hades followed with him.
And like a fool,
Or perhaps in spite of my wellbeing
My purpose is, indeed, a horse of that color
I shook his hand,
Sealed the deal with beauty and with grace,
And I rode away
Never to look back
I rode the white horse that day.
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Comments on "The White Horse"
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A former member wrote:
So eloquent.. I'm speechless.
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On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella
(183) wrote:
Love it this was so awesome:)
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On Saturday, March 10, 2007, carlosjackal
(2786) wrote:
Fantastic write, the build up to the conclusion and conclusion itself brilliant....:)
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2004, sevil_sevas_tra
(1) wrote:
Very lovely work - i enjoy your imagery; you've definitely got a unique style. Thank you for your comment!
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
Wow... cool story... my first read of you... gonna see where this goes... 1, Seth
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On Saturday, December 4, 2004, rondant
(58) wrote:
very nice......Ronda
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A former member wrote:
I love it. One thing is that so many people imagine Death to be a black horse, strangely. But in my experience the truth is never that plain. After all, evil often disguises itself in a form of good.....
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Exactly the point I was trying to make! thank you.
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
"...behold the pale horse, and the man who sat upon him was death; and hell followed with him." from the bible(can't remember which book) nice spin, VERY well written. applause! b
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, VenomPlease
(134) wrote:
Oh yes, you are the first person to catch onto that. I believe it is from Revelations 6:8 or something like that...
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On Wednesday, December 22, 2004, shadowsinthelight
(146) wrote:
Yes, you are correct, some bibles he is a pale horse, but in the catholic bible he is a pale green horse. Go figure. Very nice write. S.
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A former member wrote:
very awesome write
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
A magnificent diamond turned to an ebony soul....love that line...well done