See If I...

By xX pretty vacant Xx

well go ahead and try to break me.

i'm already broken into pieces so small
there's not much left to tear apart.

stamp on me

see if i flinch.

stab me and see if i fall.

i've already let go of every inch
of self worth
i may have had left.

it was disintegrating in my hands anyway.
i set it free.

there's no use for it here anymore.

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© 2005 xX pretty vacant Xx
Published on Wednesday, October 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Sunday, August 14, 2011, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    apropos of my current situation. well said

  • Morbid_insanity On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, Morbid_insanity (74)By person wrote:

    So releaving, Such a feeling of stregnth. Above it all. "Stab me and see if I fall" Positively brilliant. Nice write ~Josh

  • VenomPlease On Thursday, October 20, 2005, VenomPlease (134)By person wrote:

    I love how this has that *sting* to it... so raw... so great.

  • A former member wrote: This is good...I like the details you've added into this...good wording as well...I like it. *Evangel*

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