Somebody Break Her

By TornPaperDoll

Break her please,
Tear her apart,
Crush that sad,
Aching heart.
Take that film,
Off her eyes,
Stuff her mouth,
With tasty lies.
Then let her scream,
As loud as she can.
Raise up an army,
Strike up the band.
Peel off the band-aids,
That cover the pain.
Leave her outside,
In the pouring rain.
Take the stitches
From her mouth,
I’m asking you nicely;
She wants to get out.
Somebody break her,
Somebody please.
There’s a little girl dying,
Inside of me.

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Published on Thursday, December 25, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Somebody Break Her"

On Tuesday, March 8, 2011, Alexander (4) wrote:

very talented. I love the flow and the pictures I see in my head as I read your poems.
On Wednesday, April 15, 2009, lovechild (43) wrote:

i know how this feels and it is like a disconnection with the best part of yourself
A former member wrote: sad and beautiful
On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242) wrote:

haunting and pleasing -kitty
On Friday, December 31, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

Wonderfull .... Seamed so real
A former member wrote: i really love this! i think everyone has felt this way before..awesome job dude!
A former member wrote: awesome...this is one of my favorites..
On Thursday, April 8, 2004, OLd SouL (734) wrote:

awesome, awesome work. In a sense.. this was perfect. *shrugs* I don't know what else to say. :::OLd
On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171) wrote:

*stunned* such a powerful and aming poem, great job, going into my favorites ~Emptyness~
On Monday, February 16, 2004, physicalgraffiti (56) wrote:

if i can feel it i love it. This one i can feel in every inch of my body. Stunning
A former member wrote: im speechless, nice write.
On Thursday, December 25, 2003, Tracer (100) wrote:

such anguish in this write...I felt every word...^vTracerv^
A former member wrote: 'Take that film, Off her eyes, Stuff her mouth, With tasty lies.' we all have that nine inch nail deep inside of us, it's our sins crucified; sometimes they surface & fcuk w/ us;comfort your hurt, love it, it'll turn around and kiss you back.the lit
A former member wrote: the little girl will then kick some ass! Leave the pouring rain outside.. .
A former member wrote: i can totally identify with this one torn...it wrenches my heart...good write